Ysabel_xox
First of all, we have an amazing set of characters. Cooper seems to be the innocent and oblivious one. Adrian is the mature one in the group. Kristine is the best girl for being a simp. And Calvin. There's an air of mystery I like about him. Its a fun, light read. Away from the high fiction of this platform. Though the writing have several grammatical errors here and there, they can be easily corrected. Ganbari, author!
Hehehe, so ye This novel is my favourite. Storyline, story, plot whatever, everything is really great and good and fluffy with a lot of fluff.😚 There is still a scene somewhere in the beginning chapters where we didn't get information of what happened to our boi Cooper in the past🥺 And me wanna know really bad.🙂 Ok now about this novel, our MC or better said MY MC *cough* sorry..🤧 So our MC, Cooper is a fluff ball with fluff. We love him. We love him really bad.🥰 He's cute, innocent, freaking funny and cute. He has a..should I reveal??😅 Uhmmm😥 ye let's keep it a secret.🤫 Let's start again. So ma boi Cooper's (future) hubby is called Cal. He always listens to music, sleeps everywhere and ignores everyone. Does that not remind you of someone?🤔 Oh, I remember! THAT'S YOU. Story starts with our boi Cooper who wants to go to school. For some uNkNoWn reasons, he wasn't allowed to go to school by his papa.😔 Finally he got papa to agree and goes to school! He's the most perfect bibiboi that I have ever seen! You'll find yourself screeching, screaming and dying out of fluff! What else can you even wish for??😍 And no, Cooper ain't poor like us. His papa is RiCh. Cooper goes to school with his attendant that is one year older than him, I think? I only remember his nickname, sorry.😪 It's Ari lolol. He meets friends and ofc the ML!🤤 But what an awkward first impression.. Or second. Cal gets beaten up and MC calls the teacher to save his butt. Ye, what to think.. I dunno😐 Every chara is nice and sweet and again freaking funny!🤣 Pls read this big boi, read it and know we luv u and this book AND Cooper~♡ I highly recommend this book as it is refreshing, just like the AC in your room. This review in short = READ IT Pls don't ask me why this was said at the ending of my review. Thank you very much.🙃 And ye~ I see u when ur reading it🙂 Cause you like my comments. Busted.😂 No escaping me unfortunately~♡ As last thank you author for this beautiful story! I'm very happy I got to find this and read it!🥰 Take your time in writing chapters and stay healthy and know that I luv u too~♡
I wont add a lot of details about the story but so far I like adrians character. Characters are well developed, story was pretty casual but interesting and the flow is pretty smooth. The only problem I saw was some typo ( which is normal because we are just writers and sometimes we experience to have fat fingers when typing for some reason specially when you are using a phone ) and also some terms like You, at first I thought it was You (Yu), but after a few times I saw it, I realize that it was you (yuh) for young. Thats all
The chapters are short so it's a quick read. You can binge read them easily and have fun. Your plot is really good. But there are a lot of grammatical errors and you have written the story in both present as well as past tense. You should edit the chapters and stick to one tense. The errors don't stop the reader from going to the next chapter though :) You've done a great job considering English isn't your first language. Keep writing !
I like this story! I didn't expect this to be that good (because of the first short chapter) but it's really good. The characters' personality is 👌. I love my baby boy Cooper. He is so cute but sometimes he is so stubborn that I want to pinch his cheeks sooooo hard. Adrian and Kristine's banter is lol and Calvin when he had enough that's why he always teases Cooper is 👌👌👌. I love these 4. The only shortcomings for me is the spellings and grammars but I know that you will still improve and I will ne here to witness that till the end of this story. Thank you for this wonderful story!!!