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Reviews of My Heart Beats For You |bxb|

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My Heart Beats For You |bxb|

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QUEEN_
QUEEN_Lv10QUEEN_

The plot is really refreshing and interesting. It's quite a cute love story of a sweet boy. Compliments to the real life situations alot. Keep up with your good work! Looking forward to how the story develops👍

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mssuigeneris
mssuigenerisLv3mssuigeneris

First of all, we have an amazing set of characters. Cooper seems to be the innocent and oblivious one. Adrian is the mature one in the group. Kristine is the best girl for being a simp. And Calvin. There's an air of mystery I like about him. Its a fun, light read. Away from the high fiction of this platform. Though the writing have several grammatical errors here and there, they can be easily corrected. Ganbari, author!

YuiHorie
YuiHorieLv13YuiHorie

Hehehe, so ye This novel is my favourite. Storyline, story, plot whatever, everything is really great and good and fluffy with a lot of fluff.😚 There is still a scene somewhere in the beginning chapters where we didn't get information of what happened to our boi Cooper in the past🥺 And me wanna know really bad.🙂 Ok now about this novel, our MC or better said MY MC *cough* sorry..🤧 So our MC, Cooper is a fluff ball with fluff. We love him. We love him really bad.🥰 He's cute, innocent, freaking funny and cute. He has a..should I reveal??😅 Uhmmm😥 ye let's keep it a secret.🤫 Let's start again. So ma boi Cooper's (future) hubby is called Cal. He always listens to music, sleeps everywhere and ignores everyone. Does that not remind you of someone?🤔 Oh, I remember! THAT'S YOU. Story starts with our boi Cooper who wants to go to school. For some uNkNoWn reasons, he wasn't allowed to go to school by his papa.😔 Finally he got papa to agree and goes to school! He's the most perfect bibiboi that I have ever seen! You'll find yourself screeching, screaming and dying out of fluff! What else can you even wish for??😍 And no, Cooper ain't poor like us. His papa is RiCh. Cooper goes to school with his attendant that is one year older than him, I think? I only remember his nickname, sorry.😪 It's Ari lolol. He meets friends and ofc the ML!🤤 But what an awkward first impression.. Or second. Cal gets beaten up and MC calls the teacher to save his butt. Ye, what to think.. I dunno😐 Every chara is nice and sweet and again freaking funny!🤣 Pls read this big boi, read it and know we luv u and this book AND Cooper~♡ I highly recommend this book as it is refreshing, just like the AC in your room. This review in short = READ IT Pls don't ask me why this was said at the ending of my review. Thank you very much.🙃 And ye~ I see u when ur reading it🙂 Cause you like my comments. Busted.😂 No escaping me unfortunately~♡ As last thank you author for this beautiful story! I'm very happy I got to find this and read it!🥰 Take your time in writing chapters and stay healthy and know that I luv u too~♡

heyimliane
heyimlianeLv2heyimliane

The story is good! I’m not much into BxB or Yaoi but daaannnggg! I love thiiiss! But I hope you make more long updates, I read this so fast loool! I was like “wait, I’m done already?”

Ysabel_xox
Ysabel_xoxAuthorYsabel_xox

Gonna be shameless and rate my story all 5 lol. We're 10 chapters already (wow)! I will promise to improve more and make my chapters longer (hopefully). Thanks for reading and enjoying my stories! ❤

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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Dawn_in_dark
Dawn_in_darkLv4Dawn_in_dark

Very good topic of this novel. I found it very very interesting. 😁😁Do regular updates dear author. Gonna read it till end. Please make it sure to update more chapters on regular basis 😊😉.Keep it up📖📖💝💝

SSKV_R3D
SSKV_R3DLv1SSKV_R3D

I wont add a lot of details about the story but so far I like adrians character. Characters are well developed, story was pretty casual but interesting and the flow is pretty smooth. The only problem I saw was some typo ( which is normal because we are just writers and sometimes we experience to have fat fingers when typing for some reason specially when you are using a phone ) and also some terms like You, at first I thought it was You (Yu), but after a few times I saw it, I realize that it was you (yuh) for young. Thats all

mynightskies92
mynightskies92Lv2mynightskies92

Fantastic storyline , I especially like the different pov's , the characters are loveable, bubbly and definate.! Looking forward to more chapters!! Its a fabulous piece of work..

madskie00017
madskie00017Lv11madskie00017

I am in love with your surreal plot characterization and how impressive your work is. I enjoyed reading the story. Please keep writing! More Chapters Please! I want more!

Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4Drapetomaniac12

The chapters are short so it's a quick read. You can binge read them easily and have fun. Your plot is really good. But there are a lot of grammatical errors and you have written the story in both present as well as past tense. You should edit the chapters and stick to one tense. The errors don't stop the reader from going to the next chapter though :) You've done a great job considering English isn't your first language. Keep writing !

Tara_Troop10101
Tara_Troop10101Lv1Tara_Troop10101

This book is amazing! The prologue made me want to read more immediately ! I love how you write each chapter! As well as the characters! Keep it up!💕✨

DaoistzfrsSN
DaoistzfrsSNLv1DaoistzfrsSN

I like this story! I didn't expect this to be that good (because of the first short chapter) but it's really good. The characters' personality is 👌. I love my baby boy Cooper. He is so cute but sometimes he is so stubborn that I want to pinch his cheeks sooooo hard. Adrian and Kristine's banter is lol and Calvin when he had enough that's why he always teases Cooper is 👌👌👌. I love these 4. The only shortcomings for me is the spellings and grammars but I know that you will still improve and I will ne here to witness that till the end of this story. Thank you for this wonderful story!!!

XXXXC
XXXXCLv3XXXXC

Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters and this is also my first time reading 'Yaoi' but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended

Rados47
Rados47Lv4Rados47

A very interesting plot with interesting characters. I like how well the story is developing and the frequent updates. All in all a good story. Please keep up the good work Author-san. Thumbs up

Oemar_danoes
Oemar_danoesLv3Oemar_danoes

Hmm, this story about bxb theme. I not kinda well into bxb because i'm into gxg. But i want to know about bxb story. Nice writing, Good metaphors, You need to stability your updates.

Sphynx_99
Sphynx_99Lv2Sphynx_99

Hi there! A really light and fun story to read. I liked how real-life situations are described, it feels genuine. And omg MC and Calvin, hehe so cute

Elise_Aigasaki
Elise_AigasakiLv3Elise_Aigasaki

The story has an interesting plot and good flow. It is casual and gives you the vibes the characters have. It has some grammatical errors, but overall, it's a good novel.

MichelleLeeee
MichelleLeeeeLv3MichelleLeeee

Though there are grammar and spelling errors, this story is an interesting take. Still early to know more about the world, but the characters are interesting enough to keep your interest. Recommended to anyone interested in Slice of life romance! Kudos to the author!!

ZOA
ZOALv12ZOA

I really liked your description and synopsis, it's quite good. The characters are also good especially Adriana. Keep writing and I hope you will update soon