Review Detail of Drapetomaniac12 in My Heart Beats For You |bxb|

The chapters are short so it's a quick read. You can binge read them easily and have fun. Your plot is really good. But there are a lot of grammatical errors and you have written the story in both present as well as past tense. You should edit the chapters and stick to one tense. The errors don't stop the reader from going to the next chapter though :) You've done a great job considering English isn't your first language. Keep writing !