I wont add a lot of details about the story but so far I like adrians character. Characters are well developed, story was pretty casual but interesting and the flow is pretty smooth. The only problem I saw was some typo ( which is normal because we are just writers and sometimes we experience to have fat fingers when typing for some reason specially when you are using a phone ) and also some terms like You, at first I thought it was You (Yu), but after a few times I saw it, I realize that it was you (yuh) for young. Thats all
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