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I think this is a book worth reading. It's consistent, has character growth with well defined personalities, and makes you anxious to read the next chapter just to find out what happens next. I also like how the author takes his time to gradually build the harem. It's not a rushed story and a lot of thought is put into it. The MC really needs to start taking charge of his secretary however and add her. He's a dunce when it comes to women but he's a take charge guy who does what needs to be done for the betterment of all. His stupidity when it comes to women is a bit out of place as a high profile CEO. CEOs should be good in dealing with men and women to have a successful business. This so far, is the only negative I see about the MC. He needs to sleep with his secretary.
NOTICE: Story underwent major editing to deal with glaring issues! Thus all previous reviews were deleted regardless of score. BUT story is still slow-paced, multi-perspective and has worldbuilding and lore that may seem boring for those only seeking for the smut chapters. If you wanted instant harem, instant smut, then this is not for you.
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So far, despite the edits, Iβm 38 chapters in and the MC is difficult to like, or even tolerate at times. Smut isnβt necessary for a harem to be enjoyable, but likable characters are. At this point, the mc is frustrating. The few potential harem candidates are a subordinate and a cranky neighbor.....the secretary is the most likable character, but the interaction with the mc are awkward, but not in a funny or good way. I will read a few more chapters since its free at this moment, and there is potential with the story concept, but eliminate some of the angst and get the mc to accept his current predicament. Plus, the Panda! The darn thing does not help the story. I know itβs supposed to be some type of comic relief, but its just vulgar and mean.
You get an MC that you don't like and he rejects system and women. The premise is decent, MC is very very very very very boring and side characters annoying and so far 1 / 4 women is decent. If the MC or side characters were interesting enough I would continue, but I fail to find a decent enemy to root for. I see no character I like apart for the secretary, which is ok. I want someone to write a villain fan fic for this where the secretary gets saved and the rest of the cast disappears. PS also the kid and her mom should be saved from a life of boredom. Character design should not be negative because of secretary and the kid and her mom. As some have said the story might get better later but I cant get past reading 70 chapters of this.
Already at ch-50 and only 3 days passed nothing too unusual happened. Too slow pace from my opinion . System has no value in MC eyes and he sees it as annoyance. No desire of making a harem in MC mind till now( perhaps it will change in coming chapters) . I think it's mature of him to think thoroughly about his situation and make decisions. Mc personality is too bland. I know it's only 3 days passed but it took 50 chapters and too much progressing in MC personality is not possible but it's frustrating to see nothing happens. Something interesting should happen in coming chapters otherwise I don't know I can continue reading this novel. It's like reading filler chapters, information of something significant is too few .
"There comes a point where you have to ask yourself how much more of your soul you're willing to let the masses devour. How little remaining self can you learn to live without? Seems like you came here to expand yourself to connect to others, to erase the lines that keep us all separate but they came to tear little pieces off of you and compete over who had the biggest, brightest, prettiest piece. When they are done and they scatter off to the next person they will dismantle you for entertainment, you stand in silence and look at the pieces of you they've ripped away just lying on the ground and they are unrecognizable. They are no longer a part of you. You felt like a cold isolated absence when they've all gone away. It gets lonely so you read the feedback to get closer to them. They all circle around to spit venom about how inadequate you are. You gave them everything, they took it and then they'd decided you are nothing. No individual could devour you whole."
If u like storys with a very passive guy that will take forever to make Progress With woman than ur correct here. This one is very slow and the decisions of the mc make everything more complicated and slow. Dont bother with this if u want mc to have plot with the Woman after 10 to 20 chaps. It will take more than 100 chapters for that.
slow slow and slowπ I loved the character development of protagonist . I have read about 85 chapters and till chp 50 it is extremely slow story development but after that there is a blossoming of intrest in the story . I had to constantly think about should I drop it(bcoz slow development) or continue it because I don't want to regret to miss an interesting story, but........................ now times have changed I started to like even slow pace story ....... pretty contradictory, I guess
if your interested in harm but are sick and tired of those mc's who are like simps and lust after every single woman they lay their eyes on, then this book is for you. The mc here has some self respect and is not someone who dances according to the woman's wills and fancies. Excellent character development where every character feels alive and are not just stepping stones for mc. It is well paced and definitely worth reading.