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RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthor3yrRachelRuth

NOTICE: Story underwent major editing to deal with glaring issues! Thus all previous reviews were deleted regardless of score. BUT story is still slow-paced, multi-perspective and has worldbuilding and lore that may seem boring for those only seeking for the smut chapters. If you wanted instant harem, instant smut, then this is not for you.

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My CEO Harem Cultivation System

RachelRuth

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LuffyLucy
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this gif looks so cool

Feiser
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Anime: Fugou Keiji: Balance: UNLIMITED if you search the name in the GIF bar you will find it

LuffyLucy:this gif looks so cool
LuffyLucy
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thanks! I'll search for the anime to watch it 😁 he looks cool

Feiser:Anime: Fugou Keiji: Balance: UNLIMITED if you search the name in the GIF bar you will find it
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alphavires
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out of curiosity what changed?

Lightnovel71
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Smut isn’t needed for a harem story to work, but it does need well developed characters with likability. Thus far, the MC is tragically under prepared for any type of relationships, let alone building a harem. Plus, the few women in the MCs scope of influence are not very intriguing. Honestly, the only character remotely interesting is the secretary.

Shielle
ShielleLv12Shielle

I thought it was reverse harem 😭 the cover image is misleading

RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

Oh yikes, Shielle. Maybe next time we can have someone make a reverse harem filled with multiple CEOs [img=recommend] for now though, I think you probably already seen: 1. Beauty and the Beasts (popular Webnovel translation!) 2. Finding Stardust (three love interests, each with their own time) 3. Villainess of Hearts (my own work with a romantic reverse harem subplot and will have a future *multiple* Ending lol)

Shielle:I thought it was reverse harem 😭 the cover image is misleading
Shielle
ShielleLv12Shielle

Ooo, sounds fun! Thanks for the recs

RachelRuth:Oh yikes, Shielle. Maybe next time we can have someone make a reverse harem filled with multiple CEOs [img=recommend] for now though, I think you probably already seen: 1. Beauty and the Beasts (popular Webnovel translation!) 2. Finding Stardust (three love interests, each with their own time) 3. Villainess of Hearts (my own work with a romantic reverse harem subplot and will have a future *multiple* Ending lol)
oca66990
oca66990Lv2oca66990

there is smut right , instant or not

RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

Not instant. Better fast-pass dude to the chapters with asterisk to see them. ** New Arc is at Chapter 140 if you want to skip the slow introductory arc ;-;

oca66990:there is smut right , instant or not
kpk53287
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there are no tags for harem and smut?

RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

Hi, kpk53287! A book can only havs a maximum of ten tags, I'll try to delete others to fit them in. But the smut only happens in chapters with ** and it's not too many xD plus Harem is already in title heh. Still, I'll fit them if I can lol

kpk53287:there are no tags for harem and smut?
Shiva_Kashyap_3268
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really cool

Alemax08
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will he get Immortality ? like not dying of old age ? i hate when i know a MC will die of old age XD i avoid those novels like a plague 😂

RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

Of course xD This isn't Cultivation if there's no Immortality thrown into the mix. Godhood and Ascension and all that good stuff xD

Alemax08:will he get Immortality ? like not dying of old age ? i hate when i know a MC will die of old age XD i avoid those novels like a plague 😂
Alemax08
Alemax08Lv14Alemax08

I'm in then 😁👍😂

RachelRuth:Of course xD This isn't Cultivation if there's no Immortality thrown into the mix. Godhood and Ascension and all that good stuff xD
RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

You'll be in for a fairly long ride then 😳 😂 that stuff happens in like 500-1000+ chaps if I remember other Cultivation works

Alemax08:I'm in then 😁👍😂
Alemax08
Alemax08Lv14Alemax08

then i hope you get a whole universe of inspiration for this novel(and other novels) to reach an end 👍

Kiyo21
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Does the MLs personality change?

NecroCultivator
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story is slow pace so I think you should decrease the number of words per chapter, shortening the chapter may help because it gets boring when I read too many chapters at one time (I don't know about other readers though , so it's just a personal pov ).