So far, despite the edits, I’m 38 chapters in and the MC is difficult to like, or even tolerate at times. Smut isn’t necessary for a harem to be enjoyable, but likable characters are. At this point, the mc is frustrating. The few potential harem candidates are a subordinate and a cranky neighbor.....the secretary is the most likable character, but the interaction with the mc are awkward, but not in a funny or good way. I will read a few more chapters since its free at this moment, and there is potential with the story concept, but eliminate some of the angst and get the mc to accept his current predicament. Plus, the Panda! The darn thing does not help the story. I know it’s supposed to be some type of comic relief, but its just vulgar and mean.
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