Great Start

Novel is great, plot is good, updates seem frequent and the MC is quite interesting. you should read it if you are interested on Cultivation Novels. Hope it continues as great as it started.

Considering your name and the synopsis, I expected this to be large harem. (Disappointed that it is not.) I personally don't like most of the male characters in DD all of them take everything for granted, and plot armor, stupid reasoning and so many coincidence protect them and guide the plot in their favor. At least tell me if this going to be one of those plot that favor the main cast or destroy them.

You get an MC that you don't like and he rejects system and women. The premise is decent, MC is very very very very very boring and side characters annoying and so far 1 / 4 women is decent. If the MC or side characters were interesting enough I would continue, but I fail to find a decent enemy to root for. I see no character I like apart for the secretary, which is ok. I want someone to write a villain fan fic for this where the secretary gets saved and the rest of the cast disappears. PS also the kid and her mom should be saved from a life of boredom. Character design should not be negative because of secretary and the kid and her mom. As some have said the story might get better later but I cant get past reading 70 chapters of this.

This is very interesting and one of the most imaginative and best stories in here, the plot is interesting, the characters are great, the women in the story is wonderful and the story and plot is very well done. Keep up the great work. If you are interested in this book just read 30+ chapter you will like it, if you are a fan of the tags. The pacing of story and characters are well done that I could not find any negative things to say about this novel.

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I don't know why any Author would think let me show MC's potential woman with someone else, and also make it worst by add so much detail and expect people to like this. Also let me make the MC enjoy that and say "You will be mine." after that. I don't want to wonder/see what will happen in the future, I am out.

It is not bad plot just seen it too many times.

You forgot Luck without it talented people and hard working people will have no life.

I have read it, and you are right the evil in that is done well and there are reasons for his and most of the others characters' actions. That world as a whole works for that story. Plus the system and it's mission are entertaining. That was a good pick mate any other recommendation you have?

I would suggest to get the tags on for the book asap, many decide choose to read based on that.

Isn't his aunt the father figure in his life. hehe

Is it just me or does anyone else think their ability to just disappear into another dimension too overpowered. 1 - safety 2 - basically teleportation 3 - faster cultivation 4 - No limit on number of people getting in the seal 5 - Place is huge / storage ring 6 - People with the seal could bring others 7 - more stuff Don't get me wrong, I like the overpoweredness, but I think he should have worked to make all of this possible. Stealing this treasure from the Hokage, that from Mizukange etc. Just 1 seal doing all of this from the get go seems too much. Can he not just spam this ability.

It is good, but something is missing here. They seemed to be just drifting, what is their goal, what do they want? If you give them something like that I think would be better. Without a goal it reads like a filler or a side story.

I agree with you, he clearly set them up and now they talk like they are friends. Even Konan who would kill because someone looked at him the wrong way, does not care about being sent to their death??? Plus Mizukage has seen Ringo's half-betrayal and no longer pays attention to Mei and them. Mizukage leaving the battle field was just cowardly. How can you love someone and still just leave after that? How could the hokage escape from him and kill someone while he did not do the same? Third hokage is the weakest anyway. Kushina should be dead too?

Someone calls him childish and then he loses control and acts childish

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He killed humanoid monsters everyday, just think it is exaggerated. It is not something new to him. He should be scared, not broken. He should turn the witness to a retard too, doesn't need to kill him. Plus now his secret weapon is revealed.

Congrats on getting contracted, I find MC's that kill so many humanoid monster and not care, and suddenly they kill a human and start puking and scared, over dramatic. Either he should have been like this the first time he killed any thing, or not so exaggerated now. It was not even close up kill, but a bullet. Also leaving a witness...

Thanks for the chapter