Oohhh another romance! I absolute love stories in this genre! You have a great concept and this is actually the first time I looking in through a male perspective. Anyway, good plot and love how this is going! Now the writing, I think you already off to a good start. It’s just pay attention to the text block. You have quite dense paragraphs there. Consider breaking it down. Grammar wise, mehh I don’t really care honestly! As long as I understand it who cares? Tehee Anyway, keep up the good work author! 😁
The plot is interesting. The writing quality is good and the story is developing well. Character design is also developing well. The world background is also good. At present I have read only 5 chapters. Since only 7 Chapters have been published not much can be said but it is expected that the stability of updates will be equally good. All the best !
The story and concept is amazing. Everything about it is really good. Character description is clear and precise. I like thunder squad already and I wonder if Freya and Hazel are the same person. Let's see how Usai tackles the situation. Update the story regularly author. Other than some minute grammatical errors, no complaints so far. Keep up the good work author.
Woah . i love the story line . Ah the princess and the masked girl both have very exciting personalities . i think the romance will be promising . As only a few chapters are there so i am eager to read it more . The writing quality is nice . And lets see what happens . But until now is good . By the Way , Keep writing .