Oohhh another romance! I absolute love stories in this genre! You have a great concept and this is actually the first time I looking in through a male perspective. Anyway, good plot and love how this is going! Now the writing, I think you already off to a good start. It’s just pay attention to the text block. You have quite dense paragraphs there. Consider breaking it down. Grammar wise, mehh I don’t really care honestly! As long as I understand it who cares? Tehee Anyway, keep up the good work author! 😁
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