Reviews of MARVEL: Killswitch's Origin

Author here, a bit too late and it's not really a review but I will explain here the bad and the good of the story, it's a little bit biased, since it's from my perspective but let's just hear me out. First, let me talk about the MC. It's not a guy getting reincarnated into a body of a child, but a child who recalled his memory of the past, and the memory only contains information about his experience of playing games and watching movies. oh also no harem. Second, the world. This is not your typical story of how the MC getting reincarnated to, let's say, only MCU world and get involved while trying to improve the already good storyline with the characters in that world becoming mobs shouting he's the best and strongest, he will save us! But it's more about the MC trying to survive from the threat of MULTIPLE world that was integrated as ONE. Such as Resident Evil, Devil May Cry, Onimusha, X-Men, and MCU. But that was the premise of the story, how would the world be if all of these were put altogether? And then BAM! this fanfic. There are also several minor world involved but it's for the progress of the plot only. Every novel had plot holes but I will try to minimize it and not letting in gaping wide and stare at you. If it's not your cup of tea, I get it. You can drop it, and come back later when there's more chapter. Third, the writing. English is not my native language so mistakes will be made, but not left unfixed. I will try my best to improve my writing as to not disturb your reading experience. Fourth, the updates schedule, for now I tried to stick at 3-5 chaps per week as to not decrease the quality of both story and writing. I will try to finish this story even though I didn't get paid for it. (mainly because I don't know how the patreon system works) :) A lot of people said the system had sentient, yes, but there's a reason for it. And it's not completely sentient if I may say. you'll find it out why in Raccoon City arc soon. For those complaining, "I came here for the Marvel tag, please delete it if there's no marvel in it." The title is Killswitch's ORIGIN, I want to tell the story of how the MC grew up and had at least some personality. Not just mindlessly wrecking world left and right and saying I'm rich handsome and had some beautiful woman to have coitus with. So the MCU will come but at a later part after a few arc and time skip. so, please be patient. sorry for the long post and the lack of potatoes. You can comment if you have any questions and critique. Thanks

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The story has, John Wick.... will don't mind if I do then. The story has, Marvel.... will don't mind if I do then. The story has, a system.... just stop talking and take my money

Somehow an 8 year old child is doing insane things that ruins the story.... hate fanfics that have a child mc its dumb and also the fact the his ai warns him to not name it and then he just names it right after idk how this mc is considered “smart” but oh well. also there is wayyyyy too much stuff going on and it doesnt even flow right with resident evil at all

I don't like this basically because the MC gets stupid or maybe emotionally stunted and does not learn from his mistakes.He makes stupid decisions and becomes reckless.I have read 30 chapters and all that tells me is different battle scenes.There is no time for character growth and the MC gets pulled into or rushes into fights.He treats the system as his only reliance to do thing instead of auxiliary role it should actually play.The author had just mixed all kinds of apocalyptic scenarios together without any order and after 30 chapters it becomes irritating.The main problem that I have is there is no planning to anything in the story.So many flashback and cliffhangers that are frankly not relevant at all.Any way story had potential at the beginning and I would have given 4.5 but it just went downhill from there.

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Just because there is John Wick Just because its Marvel Just because there is no Harem tag ...........................................................

The protagonist is overly emotional, not to mention extremely young. It is highly unrealistic for a child to be that efficient. I greatly dislike the whole mixing of every single universe the author comes up with. It is chaotic and provides nothing for the character's development.

Sentient system, too many crossovers for one story..........................................................................................................

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An expanded universe of several movies and games is something new, it is very well written and hooks once you read it, for now the stories are well managed and I hope that with so many different things in a single universe the author can lead a clear and coherent storyline is so far exceptional.

tl:dr the author needs lots of practice, outlining, and proof reading beyond spell check. in a word, the story feels "discombobulated". the following are personal observations, not personal attacks. it can be used to improve what ive read so far in this fan fiction. everythings feels slapped together, without proper setup, and is lacking in almost ever catagory. It lacks both explanation and basic lead up for almost everything, causing the whole book to feel disjointed and its like im reading a fever dream. there are too many crossovers dumped on you, and it does it almost all at once magnifying the confusion. Its almost a collection of thoughts rather than a fan fiction designed for consumption, as if the author has an unorganized story in his head, and also has difficulty putting it coherently into words on a paper. dont give up on writing, but always move forward with plans to improve.

Its ok, to many cross overs and the grammar os horrible. Its like the author made a story then slapped random words that sound like they would fIt any where in the stoRy

Probably the worst grammar I’ve seen here. Neck deep bullshit. Background is a bit better done. Unsatisfying story and plot. I probably lost some brain cells reading this.

You know why people read fanfics and novels....coz they wants to spend some time living a life of fantasy and forgot stress....but if u make the novel same as real life...same problems...not many people will like...Great fanfic...a very good story...but its tooo much drama...i know it's for character development..but what do u want to develop in 8 year old kid bro???... it's just drama

A really great fanfiction. I usually ignore giving comments and rating until 40 or 50 chapters but this one is really good ... so i can't stop myself from giving ratings to this fanfiction.. The story starts really well and until now i am enjoing every chapter. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

awful grammar, i cannot read without getting stopped by the grammar. it is like taking a pee break during a movie The system is stupid, plot makes no sense The system arrived before transmigration

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well even though I'm a little pissed off, he always gets in on other people's business and solves other people's problems even though he's still 8 damn old. Ah sorry I forgot, he is the "protagonist" always looking for trouble and hot-blooded .. fuck with other people's problems damn .. well somehow I'm annoyed with hot-blooded protagonist who wants to solve the problem, instead getting into a lot of trouble. at least the MC should think about maximizing profits when doing something troublesome. well your story is good anyway..