Somehow an 8 year old child is doing insane things that ruins the story.... hate fanfics that have a child mc its dumb and also the fact the his ai warns him to not name it and then he just names it right after idk how this mc is considered “smart” but oh well. also there is wayyyyy too much stuff going on and it doesnt even flow right with resident evil at all
I don't like this basically because the MC gets stupid or maybe emotionally stunted and does not learn from his mistakes.He makes stupid decisions and becomes reckless.I have read 30 chapters and all that tells me is different battle scenes.There is no time for character growth and the MC gets pulled into or rushes into fights.He treats the system as his only reliance to do thing instead of auxiliary role it should actually play.The author had just mixed all kinds of apocalyptic scenarios together without any order and after 30 chapters it becomes irritating.The main problem that I have is there is no planning to anything in the story.So many flashback and cliffhangers that are frankly not relevant at all.Any way story had potential at the beginning and I would have given 4.5 but it just went downhill from there.
Author here, a bit too late and it's not really a review but I will explain here the bad and the good of the story, it's a little bit biased, since it's from my perspective but let's just hear me out. First, let me talk about the MC. It's not a guy getting reincarnated into a body of a child, but a child who recalled his memory of the past, and the memory only contains information about his experience of playing games and watching movies. oh also no harem. Second, the world. This is not your typical story of how the MC getting reincarnated to, let's say, only MCU world and get involved while trying to improve the already good storyline with the characters in that world becoming mobs shouting he's the best and strongest, he will save us! But it's more about the MC trying to survive from the threat of MULTIPLE world that was integrated as ONE. Such as Resident Evil, Devil May Cry, Onimusha, X-Men, and MCU. But that was the premise of the story, how would the world be if all of these were put altogether? And then BAM! this fanfic. There are also several minor world involved but it's for the progress of the plot only. Every novel had plot holes but I will try to minimize it and not letting in gaping wide and stare at you. If it's not your cup of tea, I get it. You can drop it, and come back later when there's more chapter. Third, the writing. English is not my native language so mistakes will be made, but not left unfixed. I will try my best to improve my writing as to not disturb your reading experience. Fourth, the updates schedule, for now I tried to stick at 3-5 chaps per week as to not decrease the quality of both story and writing. I will try to finish this story even though I didn't get paid for it. (mainly because I don't know how the patreon system works) :) A lot of people said the system had sentient, yes, but there's a reason for it. And it's not completely sentient if I may say. you'll find it out why in Raccoon City arc soon. For those complaining, "I came here for the Marvel tag, please delete it if there's no marvel in it." The title is Killswitch's ORIGIN, I want to tell the story of how the MC grew up and had at least some personality. Not just mindlessly wrecking world left and right and saying I'm rich handsome and had some beautiful woman to have coitus with. So the MCU will come but at a later part after a few arc and time skip. so, please be patient. sorry for the long post and the lack of potatoes. You can comment if you have any questions and critique. Thanks
well even though I'm a little pissed off, he always gets in on other people's business and solves other people's problems even though he's still 8 damn old. Ah sorry I forgot, he is the "protagonist" always looking for trouble and hot-blooded .. fuck with other people's problems damn .. well somehow I'm annoyed with hot-blooded protagonist who wants to solve the problem, instead getting into a lot of trouble. at least the MC should think about maximizing profits when doing something troublesome. well your story is good anyway..
this is a great novel , the fighting scenes are so well defined and well planed that you can imagine yourslf in the place of protagonist , and the amelgum of all this different world might be hard but the way the author has uploded his chapters ,it has leftmuch to desire ,all in all its a worthwhile novel where you can enjoy your sweet time ,and all the best author for your coming chapters ,don't let us down 🤩🤩🤩
This totally my cup of tea. I like how MC progressing with his power and his mental barrier. Not to mention multiple dope crossovers in one single pack, totally would make the story fun as hell. This fanfic has a lot of potential, and till now I found this is very promising, at least better than some popular ranked fanfics.