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2021-07-19 22:40

You know why people read fanfics and novels....coz they wants to spend some time living a life of fantasy and forgot stress....but if u make the novel same as real life...same problems...not many people will like...Great fanfic...a very good story...but its tooo much drama...i know it's for character development..but what do u want to develop in 8 year old kid bro???... it's just drama

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Author here, a bit too late and it's not really a review but I will explain here the bad and the good of the story, it's a little bit biased, since it's from my perspective but let's just hear me out. First, let me talk about the MC. It's not a guy getting reincarnated into a body of a child, but a child who recalled his memory of the past, and the memory only contains information about his experience of playing games and watching movies. oh also no harem. Second, the world. This is not your typical story of how the MC getting reincarnated to, let's say, only MCU world and get involved while trying to improve the already good storyline with the characters in that world becoming mobs shouting he's the best and strongest, he will save us! But it's more about the MC trying to survive from the threat of MULTIPLE world that was integrated as ONE. Such as Resident Evil, Devil May Cry, Onimusha, X-Men, and MCU. But that was the premise of the story, how would the world be if all of these were put altogether? And then BAM! this fanfic. There are also several minor world involved but it's for the progress of the plot only. Every novel had plot holes but I will try to minimize it and not letting in gaping wide and stare at you. If it's not your cup of tea, I get it. You can drop it, and come back later when there's more chapter. Third, the writing. English is not my native language so mistakes will be made, but not left unfixed. I will try my best to improve my writing as to not disturb your reading experience. Fourth, the updates schedule, for now I tried to stick at 3-5 chaps per week as to not decrease the quality of both story and writing. I will try to finish this story even though I didn't get paid for it. (mainly because I don't know how the patreon system works) :) A lot of people said the system had sentient, yes, but there's a reason for it. And it's not completely sentient if I may say. you'll find it out why in Raccoon City arc soon. For those complaining, "I came here for the Marvel tag, please delete it if there's no marvel in it." The title is Killswitch's ORIGIN, I want to tell the story of how the MC grew up and had at least some personality. Not just mindlessly wrecking world left and right and saying I'm rich handsome and had some beautiful woman to have coitus with. So the MCU will come but at a later part after a few arc and time skip. so, please be patient. sorry for the long post and the lack of potatoes. You can comment if you have any questions and critique. Thanks

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