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GramDemolition3yrCommentedCh 21 20) Visitor and Healing Harry!....- GramDemolition3yrCommented
Is this the guy with high IQ and served in the forces as an agemt?Pretty dumb he is.
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Whats with the welp?
"That's good." I said "Welp, lets get this show on the road. Send me to heaven then." - GramDemolition3yrCommented
All the stereotypical writings is worthless.
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Dropped right here.
[Oni-chan!! hold on a little longer, you can do it *Sob*] - GramDemolition3yrCommented
Dumb as ****!!!
Marcus then closed his eyes and started thinking. - GramDemolition3yrCommentedCh 26 Helga, and Planting the Seed.
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Emojis are used in conversations through text.Don't add it in a novel.
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Technically he does not need any more weapons or accessories.He could get an artifact that could chose mortal champions and channel his dimensional energy after he tests them?You know a way to have influence on Earth,Cause from what i understand he would be comparable to Odin at his prime with the pace he has set soon enough
Ch 18 Learning - GramDemolition3yrCommentedCh 42 42. Asking For Help
- GramDemolition3yrCommentedCh 10 Arrival in Fire nation
- GramDemolition3yrCommentedCh 107 Follow up.
- GramDemolition3yrCommentedCh 25 Training
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The MC is naive and gives a Naruto vibe,which I particularly hate.I read 20 chapters and all he is doing is whining and getting angry at the things he can't control.Not even training for the three months he was considered a slave and instead of being vengeful and planning to blow Mary jeoise to the high heavens and making escape a priority he is like mix of Naruto and Luffy.My main problem with the MC is his lack of initiative in anything hell he could have directly stored his collar in storage space and quietly staged an escape with the others.I counted 3 times he was saved by luck and sacrifice of others.He wasted three months and in a single moment of anger undo the effort that the other spend on him indicating that he is a pig teammate who pulls others into their troubles.I don't believe any of the current admirals in any country will be as rash and brash as this one.
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Man this guy is dumb.He can't help himself and he is pitying others.
As I am thinking about how to help her she seems to have felt my touch as she tried to move away from me while water came out of the corner of her eyes as she said "I don't want to die. Please don't hurt me… " - GramDemolition3yrCommentedCh 11 Asgard
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Ok you made all the hype pointless here.
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- GramDemolition3yrCommentedCh 9 Intermission: Training and concubine...
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Why the hell is he negotiating like a pussy?
"The first condition. There will be no more harassment, be it Physical or Psychological harassment. If we found a devil that did that, we would send them back to the underworld. Either unharmed or half dead."