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I like your way of writing and i find it really good. Grammar mistakes have i not really seen when i have read your story. For the Stability of Updates here can i not see much after 2 chapters so only 3 stars. 3 Stars too, it is to new for a better rating and i can't say much for the time beeing. The Charakter are really good writen and i think it is absolutly logical that they have a hate for humans ad will kill easy. The world Background is not so good to the time beeing. Only a copy from DXD but the more you introduce the new World then i will give you more stars^^ Flaws in my sight. 1. A supernova destroys a "Universe" really!!! You can say our Universe has more the 1 Billion galaxys and every Galaxy has more the 1 Billion suns and now aonly 1 Supernova can destroy a Universe "grins". A supernova is a normal thing and it happens now and later. When our Sun becomes a Supernova in ca. 5 Billion years the it only affect our Sunsystem^^ When you will destroy a Universe you must use a Power on the same Powerscale how all Infinity Stones from the Marvel Universe or the Anihilarke from Ben 10^^ 2: For this the Ancient One is not the Guardian of the Universe he/she is only a Guardian of Earth not more. I
The only reason this novel has so many stars is because of regular updates. Just read the first few chapters. In my opinion, this story is below average in terms of writing quality and story. I have seen too many Novels like this and I doubt the author will rewrite his chapters. But, I have to give props to the author for his regular updates. He is dedicated I give him that.
Haven't read the book, but read reviews as I tend to do before reading a banger. When ever someone criticizes you just say 'Yea whatever boomer' you need to take the criticism and work on it and try to help you and your writing style; Use it to your advantage and dont make it a weakness . P.S most bangers normaly have better reviews that 2.5 stars most ok ones have 3 or 4 stars from a few people. So a 1 star juat from the authors reaction.
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Story is way to unrealistic. Imagine your hole family and planet die because of humans so you hate them. But the next day you open up a cafe and serve humans coffee etc. ??? Just because you need money you serve them like that with so much power in your hand. The other Problem is he kills every one that attack or threaten him but for some reason thats always only the no names and bad guys. Every hero or important person kept alive like Thor odin nick ancient one etc. where is the policy of killing when they attack them?
For an OP Marvel fanfic it is pretty good. There are some things that seem forced due to the authors whims, but that is to be expected in fanfics. Would recommend the male mc having a male friend as it gives him a more positive image. There is a reason why harem anime's and manga the mc has a male best friend. The writing quality is alright, some mistakes here and there but i'm not complaining. If you enjoy these type of novels and have some time to kill then it is worth checking out.
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