Review Detail of HeartNSoul in Marvel: Aspect of Domination [COMPLETED]

For an OP Marvel fanfic it is pretty good. There are some things that seem forced due to the authors whims, but that is to be expected in fanfics. Would recommend the male mc having a male friend as it gives him a more positive image. There is a reason why harem anime's and manga the mc has a male best friend. The writing quality is alright, some mistakes here and there but i'm not complaining. If you enjoy these type of novels and have some time to kill then it is worth checking out.