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  • Spike009
    Spike0094mth
    Commented

    Can you tell us the real name of the novel please

    Ch 62 Luffy Awakens Conqueror's haki
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    Son of Whitebeard: Exposed by Gold List
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  • Spike009
    Spike0094mth
    Replied to kamidemond

    Like I said it’s better to give him level or gears to his powers. And let people know about them. So that we realize oh . He did not use Sage mode and kcm mode yet and is only fighting so hard because he is fighting handicap. If we know that he is fighting handicap and can actually win if he uses his full power. No one will complain like this.

    Ch 173 Chapter 173 : Facing Sasuke 4 (Rewrite)
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    In Naruto With Minato Template
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  • Spike009
    Spike0094mth
    Replied to FirdausBudin26

    How about marrying someone of his size then

    Ch 3 Magma Profound Veins!
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    King Of Beasts In Against The Gods
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  • Spike009
    Spike0094mth
    Commented

    As a author you should know the do’s and dont’s in novels. One of the biggest taboo is Nerfing. Author your novel is not perfect and no one expects it to be. After all we all understand you are a novice writer trying your best. There are many other problems your novel has short chapter, dragging story, writing 2 para of previous chapters in current one etc. But to be honest although it’s annoying it’s not much big of a deal. Because your story is good. Even though the filler arc of when he went in past was boring but still people are ok with it. Because we know you will eventually come in line. But now this. I know you mentioned that he is not using his full power. But this is Nerfing at its worst. You need to realize that the Mangekyo Sharingan Sasuke is not even in top 10 when it comes to power level. And now you are making such a character give Kirito such a hard time. This past few chapters are the worst you have written so far. Period. My suggestion to you is simple. If you want people to know that your Mc is holding back. Make sure you clearly line out his power levels. Eg in DBZ they have super Sayan levels, in one piece they have gears. So if you want to have a good fight make sure you let people know that Mc has yet not used Conquerors Haki, Yet not used 9 tails etc. because from this chapter although you tried to mention it. It was not enough details.

    Ch 173 Chapter 173 : Facing Sasuke 4 (Rewrite)
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    In Naruto With Minato Template
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  • Spike009
    Spike0094mth
    Commented

    So you are saying his curse mark is stronger than susanoo. I think you need to consider what you are writing here author. The fact a Haki infused punch was able to destroy susanoo but not hurt Sasuke seems a little silly. And lastly Sasuke thing of giving him random Powerup just for him to able to fight Mc is forced in my opinion. Too forced.

    Ch 172 Chapter 172 : Facing Sasuke 3 (Rewrite)
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    In Naruto With Minato Template
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    Taboo activated. Mc becomes system slave Me dropping this novel

    Ch 23 “New strength”
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    One Piece: The Demon of Fire
    Anime & Comics · GodaSensei
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    Please don’t drag it more that it’s neeeded.

    Ch 171 Chapter 171 : Facing Sasuke 2 (Rewrite)
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    So how is he not a innate. Copying th original is ok and all . But at-least put some effort

    Ch 91 Chapter 91
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    Reincarnated in Long Live Summons with Powerful Abilities [DROPPED]
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Replied to Spike009

    The funny thing here is forget about Normal Mangekyo Sharingan. Even if it’s eternal he should be able to fight head on and even defeat Sasuke. He has Haki, 9 tails, chakra chains, flying thunder god, sealing etc. Not to mention the dumbest thing and perhaps the biggest weakness of dojutsu in Naruto anime. Which only Danzo seems to realize for some reason. Anyone can just pluck the eyes out and that’s it. From super shadow they will be as weak as a jonin again. But for plot purpose no one goes for their eyes

    Ch 170 Chapter 170 : Facing Sasuke (Rewrite)
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    This fight makes no sense. Even if Sasuke gets Mangekyo Sharingan unless he has eternal Mangekyo he should not even be a able to face Kirito. I mean just the chain ability should be easily able to restrain Sasuke, not to mention that sauske can actually keep up with his swordsmanship. Here is a thing author. This is what happens when you write a strong character. You make them defeat countless strong enemies. And then just for plot purpose you suddenly make other characters strong unreasonably. That’s what you did. If Kirito is struggling with just this how is he going to fight the 6 paths. I know he has not used Haki but let’s be honest. Haki is not on same level as 6 path. Unles you put baryon mode

    Ch 170 Chapter 170 : Facing Sasuke (Rewrite)
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    I am surprised no one noticed the Mc just broke the 4th wall. Holy shit.

    Ch 165 Chapter 165 : Jonin Test 5 (Rewrite)
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    I hope there is a fight. Where he at-least shows 40 % of his power.

    Ch 164 Chapter 164 : Jonin Test 4 (Rewrite)
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented
    Ch 162 Chapter 162 : Jonin Test 2 (Rewrite)
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    In Naruto With Minato Template
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    Game of Throne

    Ch 177 Notice 2
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    Bro again please stop repeating 3 paras from last chapter every-time. People will appreciate it instead of you wrote next part of the story. I mean it’s not anime that it needs a recap. We can just scroll back if we want to know what happened.

    Ch 160 CHAPTER 174 : MEETING THE DEATH
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    Ok my only request is since you can’t get all the powers from naruto don’t give any powers of DBZ to them.

    Ch 39 CHAPTER 39 : BEATING TSUNADE
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    Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    Seriously man. I really do t know how and why. You make character so OP in fight and very next moment he becomes lame. Just don’t make him a goody to shoe please

    Ch 35 CHAPTER 35 : KONOHA ELDERS
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    Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)
    Anime & Comics · kamidemond
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    Drop I won’t suggest dropping just say you are going on break. As for which you should do. Definitely Game of throne. But I would suggest don’t use marvel Thor. As he would be too OP. And unless you are really good at writing OP Mc that to in a normal world. I would suggest go with Thor from Assassins creed or something . Where although he is Thor but to a reasonable range. And not OP as Thor from Marvel.

    Ch 175 NOTICE
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    Anime & Comics · kamidemond
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    Even if your chapter length has increased it still does not change the main problem. That is no matter how small a scene is you drag it and milk it into a chapter.

    Ch 159 Chapter 159 : Medical Jutsu (Rewrite)
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  • Spike009
    Spike0095mth
    Commented

    Don’t let Mc be controlled by anyone please. If I wanted to see that it’s already there in original

    Ch 158 Chapter 158 : Two Akatsuki Down 2 (Rewrite)
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