So are you bruh

Omg !! He actually came back with the milk 😻

Thank god. Being in the DxD universe that long was probably rotting your brain, Author.

I like glasses on any girl but Sona is just not the first choice I'd go. Not even that great of a personality either for it to justify picking someone that looks like an undeveloped Middle Schooler bro

Sona = MID.

It has become a bit monotonous, There's no exciting feeling I get like when I first found your story and read it for the first time, I wish you could have made his adventure more exciting or at least focus more on him so I don't feel so distant from the main character, it doesn't help I hate his wife 😅

Pov: YOU

Boi, why are you up this late?

Hephaestus is more overrated as a FL in my opinion with my experience in these kinds of stories. Tied with Hestia

Wow my words completely flew over your head, I already know all of that. I'm just genuinely wondering how he hasn't kicked the bucket yet. That's it lol

Professional yapper

Why is Mizuki still being brought up? I thought he was dead ages ago. Author,what are you doing to your story? It doesn't feel like I'm reading the story I read in the past that I enjoyed

Overused concept

Write your own story rather than yapping in the comments with your random suggestions lol

literal worst pairing. romance just doesn't feel authentic enough or realistic enough and his friend's just don't act their age unless they're throwing tantrums as the only sign they behave like children

Get off his meat already

HUHH

Did you pray today? 🤨

If he can create his own Techniques shouldn't the protagonist b able to do the same?