Review Detail of Spielmann in Marvel: Aspect of Domination [COMPLETED]

I like your way of writing and i find it really good. Grammar mistakes have i not really seen when i have read your story. For the Stability of Updates here can i not see much after 2 chapters so only 3 stars. 3 Stars too, it is to new for a better rating and i can't say much for the time beeing. The Charakter are really good writen and i think it is absolutly logical that they have a hate for humans ad will kill easy. The world Background is not so good to the time beeing. Only a copy from DXD but the more you introduce the new World then i will give you more stars^^ Flaws in my sight. 1. A supernova destroys a "Universe" really!!! You can say our Universe has more the 1 Billion galaxys and every Galaxy has more the 1 Billion suns and now aonly 1 Supernova can destroy a Universe "grins". A supernova is a normal thing and it happens now and later. When our Sun becomes a Supernova in ca. 5 Billion years the it only affect our Sunsystem^^ When you will destroy a Universe you must use a Power on the same Powerscale how all Infinity Stones from the Marvel Universe or the Anihilarke from Ben 10^^ 2: For this the Ancient One is not the Guardian of the Universe he/she is only a Guardian of Earth not more. I