Mel_Aniv
Let me take a minute to process everything..... This was nice! A whole new level kind of nice! A heart tearing kind of nice that left us, readers, feeling emotional and passionate and...man I'm so touched. This is a one in a million kind of nice. You did a good job there author! I wish you luck on your writing journey! I look forward to more of your incoming chapters. Hands raised to you! Keep up the good work!
I like that despite the fast pacing of the first few chapters of Mael Growing up, you still keep it realistic. The MC is strong and talented which amazed his parents, but his genius still can't easily beat experience during the coming of age chapters when fighting his father. This is a good story, and there's a lot of chapter which I can spend a lot of time to read during my free time!!
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
Reviewing this author is quite a dare, the search engine with the name or pseudonym: Mel_Aniv, lists 64 works... The Story: Lumia: Another World. Genre: Fantasy 224 Chapters 830.7K views The first chapter: Retreat... was written on 25 April 220; Mel_Aniv, has been writing for 9 consecutive months. He shows perseverance, being a professional, involved artist, a gifted reader-writer providing hundreds of avid pages full of stories to listen to, tell or just read. Translated with ***.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)
This story is very interesting and it got me hooked up instantly. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it. The author did a great job in describing scenarios. All in all, the author did a great job, and looking forward to reading more.
Hi and awesome job! I've only read a few chapters so far but I can't wait to go deeper into the story. I found the pace and build up refreshing for the genre. I'll add to my collection because I'm sure there's more in store for Mael's journey! Thank you for the swap and good luck as well with your work!
Very good story here! Author weaves his character into a new world rather abruptly, but it soon doesnt matter because the new world itself is exciting!! Characters are interesting and have their own thoughts so far; no one takes tne MC for granted and whatnot. But I’m excited to watch our young MC grow more and more powerful as he grows up! Thanks for writing!
This is incredible and mind-blowing. I am in awe in front of your writing skills. Like, seriously. I have only read the first chapter so far and the feeling of betrayal in the very first part... god, you know how to play your audiences. I can’t promise to read this book to the end - or at least not in the time being - since the chapters are a bit long and I already have many books to read. However, for people who are interested in reading a long and well-written book, I definitely recommend this book.
Its a good kind of slow-burn story. as it goes on you'd see setups that the author has planned in advance. It's a good book to get lost in, and with time it just gets better. I highly recommend it to those who want a good read. I only hope that by the time I catch up on the chapters, the story is ready to go. cheers!