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Review Detail of RaSi in Lumia: Other World

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RaSiLv23yrRaSi

Planning and plotting of story is good. Author has invested a lot of time and effort. Story comes out to be good a read. Would expect author to release more chapters. Grammar is quite okay. Please continue writing.

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Lumia: Other World

Mel_Aniv

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Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

Thank you for your support! I will surely and happily write more!

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Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

Thanks for reading it to the end. Some dropped it halfway though. Maybe it was not so attention-grabbing at the first five chapters.

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Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

Thank you for your concern...I've re edited it.

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Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

I know this is shameless but I want to ask for your support for the last time. I joined WPC and badly needed votes. The title was "Amnesia Of Genius Copycat" Please if you have spare stones 🙏 It was a Zombie novel by the way 😔

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Hello 👋 I am back after 4 years. I really needed your support on my latest novel "Murim Founder of 7 Martial Paths" Please add it to your colls and also read. I improved a lot over the years. This is just me hoping 🙏, I hope to have your understanding 😔