LAjames
This story is really wonderful. the plot is well planned and thought through. The most challenging thing I found here is writing the story in 1st POV. You have done that job very well. Congratulations. Its really a tough writing style. The world set up is also very well described. Overall this is really a good read. Waiting for more chapters so that the story gets more and more interesting.
Very well written! The author has a good grasp on language, and writes in a style that reminds me of one of those 19th century adventure novels. Only a couple of punctuation errors here and there, but those can be overlooked. The chapters could be longer, but it's okay if they aren't. I like the premise a lot; I hope the author will keep on writing!
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