Ironette
I really like the writing style of this author and, the story development is great too. The grammer is flowing greatly through out the story. The story background development with, 3rd person's POV, is really admirable. I can approved this story to be read.â¤ď¸â¤ď¸â¤ď¸â¤ď¸â¤ď¸đđđđ
The grammar is great! The story's development is great too which means the plot of this story will be/is great! Author, you should continue to make more and more chapters! I love how you do your story and support it but! But! I advise splitting your paragraphs, it bores people out, I got that review but you know, as authors continue their journey, their writing skills and experience grows! So keep on writing, author! Love lots and with most gratitude! God bless!
It's nice well-written work and I might call it fanfic if you don't mind. I am a marvel series fan too and so I can relate with the incidents very well. Your writing style is nice. All I can say is trying adding more dialogues as it makes it more attractive weather than conveying everything through lengthy paragraphs. Keep it up I hope you write even better novels in future. ALL THE BEST :)