Do consider fixing some errors ij this chapter.

Actually. This one has no problems. I liked it.

Definitely needs fixing, Mr. Author.

The chapter is interesting but you must certainly fix a lot of parts in it, Mr. Author. But overall, it is decent.

You forgot the pronoun, Mr. Author. "His actions maddened me."

Do clarify, Mr. Author.

Hello, dear Author. There's a mistake here.

I'm afraid that this sentence is quite intricate. It's hard to understand.

Hello, dear Author. There's a mistake here.

Well, I just want to support a friend. The plot of this story is great and if everyone gives it a try, I am sure you guys will like it. Try it and you will love it!

Wow! Just wow! I am honestly obsessed with how well constructed this novel is, and to think is was a Chinese novel originally! Amazing! I would indeed recommend this to others and surely you guys will not be disappointed!

I am honestly impressed with the plot of this story. I just forgot to add a review. I recommend this to everyone out there who wants to read something for enjoyment. Thumbs up for me. Plus the writing quality is decent enough.

I saw this just now, after browsing through some tags and glad that I saw it. It is a noteworthy story that is new. Although there isn’t any thrill yet, I see a good potential in the story in hopes that the story becomes more enjoyable. The pace so far is fine and the writing quality is decent. I am actually willing to try this out.

Alluring

I've also created another review that will not even help the ratings above. Anyways, the purpose of the other review is a message for everyone.

I'm sad for spoiling but no problem.

Fun fact too, "No matter what Aura he produces." I think you got it wrong, auras are pretty important. Other than making people shiver or tremble, if utilized properly, one could even suffocate a person with just their aura. Meaning to say, the aura he produced has a high capability that already marks him a potent student and must certainly be cautious of whom to pick as a mentor.

A child of an Emperor. And plus, wouldn't that make Dexter look bad? I'm making him a role-model, someone wise and joyous. He never meant ill towards Lawrence. Plus, an emperor cannot force him to do anything, unless if it is obligatory like participate in a war. And Lawrence is, if you've already forgotten, still a minor, five years of age at that. So I don't see any sense on what you're saying. If you haven't learned, apprenticeship varies when the students accepts his mentor, and his mentor accept his student. After all, an oath sealed with magic needs to be said sincerely.

He must've been caught up to the fight huh? He probably didn't think of the consequences because he was ordered to fight his brother. Even I thought of it, why Lawrence didn't?