Review Detail of Noc_Tristan222 in In Case

The grammar is great! The story's development is great too which means the plot of this story will be/is great! Author, you should continue to make more and more chapters! I love how you do your story and support it but! But! I advise splitting your paragraphs, it bores people out, I got that review but you know, as authors continue their journey, their writing skills and experience grows! So keep on writing, author! Love lots and with most gratitude! God bless!