Review Detail of Aislinn_Jasper in In Case

It's nice well-written work and I might call it fanfic if you don't mind. I am a marvel series fan too and so I can relate with the incidents very well. Your writing style is nice. All I can say is trying adding more dialogues as it makes it more attractive weather than conveying everything through lengthy paragraphs. Keep it up I hope you write even better novels in future. ALL THE BEST :)