Reviews of HAPPY EVER AFTER

Definitely has Omniscient Reader vibes about it, and a really great premise of novels come to life and monster fighting. One of my favorite webnovel tropes, so I am definitey on board for more. Only complaint is some lack of clarity around POV, but it is a really fun read regardless.

Really an enjoyable read! just my type 😬 About the novel- A well crafted plot line with a spicy concept, mild sprinkles of humouric condiments, delectablely tasty sequence of events paired with freshly grated narratives, finely minced characters combined with palatable personalities and not to forget the appetizing flavours of comdey, mystery, action, system and dainty world building! so yummy 🤤! Good job chef-author!

Well then, I don't usually read system stories since most of them tend to be, in all honesty, the same thing all the time in every story that uses this, and sometimes the system used is well...not good or it's not used that well by the characters. But that is not the case with this story right here, where the system is used pretty well and makes sense, which is good and in my opinion this is how most of the system novels should be. But let's start with the review proper, first off the world, it's pretty good and suck you right in with everything that happens and makes you want more. As for the characters, they are all pretty good and as of now pretty well written I have no complaints with any of them. Now the writing, it's pretty good there's a few grammatical errors here and there but I won't shame the author as we all make mistakes and it's not something unfixable All in all, pretty good story and I will be coming back for more P.S: if this sounds to vague it's in purpose since I want everyone that reads this review to read the story

I really enjoyed reading this novel❤️❤️❤️ so cool. The twist of the story is very interesting 💕[img=recommend] I think the author of this novel is well-inspired and has fond of imagination.. looking forward for more novels 🥰

I like how the story goes with the system. The precise items, weapons, and skills are described neatly. It's like being in an RPG game where fantasy and reality blend perfectly. I want to know more about Zash, and the characters, hope you give us more chaps!

.................. ❤❤❤ 😍😍😍 Beautiful story I love how the author did the story; it really is good and stunning... The synopsis already shows the beauty of the story what more in the chapters... and it's inspired by omniscient reader's viewpoint too! so another reason to read it! I love it ❤❤❤ I will add this to my reading list~~

Interesting Story. The characters are well around. Its only starting so there could be more home for improvements. This story has a potential so keep it up author.

Nice story, I like where the event and arc go. The writing is also beautiful. This is a great novel. I can't wait to see where the story goes next[img=recommend]

A story within the story of a story. Though what I said is confusing, the author does her best to narrate the story in a comedic interesting manner. I had laughs while reading it. The story unfolds with a good pace as details only come when necessary. With fairy tale like quests, the novel seems to promise a great plot. Good work, author!

I really enjoyed this novel, from the first chapter it draws you into their world and wonderfully showcases the MC's character. Gave me a lot of isekai manga/transmigration vibes but a solid read! Def recommend!

I love how it began. So many thrilling instances from the first chapter onwards. Genie, earthquake, meteorites... Interesting. The background of the story is very well built. I have added this to my library. keep it up, author!

so cool. inlove with the story. the longer i got to read the chapters the deeper I fell inlove with the story.. I love the twist 🥰🥰🥰🥰 Good job!

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Writing quality 3: It's simple and does the job. There some grammar issues tho. Try using ProWritingaid. It might be useful to improve the writing quality. Stability of updates 4: Since you do update frequently but not every 1 or 2 days. Story Development 5: It is a bit fast but I like to get into the action sooner rather than later. So 5. Character Design 4: I getting into her head more often would help. World Background 5: There is a lot to discover. Keep up the good work.

I really like this novel! As a fan of game stories, this one really works for me. The novel is well written and describes things and items well. When I read the beginning, the MC situation makes me remember myself reading the final chapter of the mangá Bleach and my reaction was worse.

It's an interesting story. You did a good job with the world building and character design. I felt something was a little off with the writing quality, but I couldn't quite put my finger on it. Otherwise I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done.

After reading the chapters, I can't say anything other than that this novel is a work of art. Initially, it was kind of difficult to read as there were a lot of separated paragraphs, but I coped with it well. This novel really hooked me, and I think that the author had put their maximum effort in the novel! I really enjoyed it, and I hope to see more! Amazing work, author!

This what's the phone read it is really well written and the character design is great the system is also very interesting and the world is well captivating I give It a 5-star

The story has a lot of things going for it and a couple of themes entertwined into one (so you won't get bored/makes it more unique). I think the use of the system is deliberate and well placed. Overall an interesting read!