Aryna_Stan
Who doesn't love a good fairytale about fairies? My childhood were filled to the brim with them and I still have fairytopia movie in my PC that I watch all the time. What am I even saying? Back to this mad book. I love everything about this book and I just love little Eden. This book is a good start to fulfilling all my inner children when they decide to wake up. I love the flow, the pacing is good and entire story looks natural and the vivid descriptions in it makes me feel that I'm actually watching it and not just reading. Keep it up author.
This story is an amazing read the, attention to detail with jobs and world building is quite amazing, I could tell the author is taking time and consideration with that kind of thing which is very appreciated and the interactions amongst characters is absolutely amazing. I really like the personality of this main character cause I feel like in a way she’s relatable. Great work so far!
Great job! I really like the names you give to your characters, it's very cute and very fairy-like 😂 The plot is interesting, as i have never seen a fairy book before. Also, the writing quality deserves an applaud👏 grammar and vocabularies you use are all top notch. The story also flows naturally, i can say this is a very promising book even when there are only like 3 chapters out now. Keep on writing, Author! This is a good story, I'm sure you will make it big someday with this book! 🥺