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Love the concept of Fairy vs Elves. It's a refreshing and an interesting plot, to be the honest. Also, the writing style's neat. The MC has a strong personality which I truly like. Piece of advice: You have to work more on the world-building, in order for your reader to appreciate more of the story's setting. I believe it will surely give a good insight to us as you write a fantasy novel. Plus, your fictional creation will let your readers immensely drown to it if you do so. (It's your decision whether you will apply it or not, but I hope you will. :>) Anyways, I hope it helps. And, keep it up, Author! :)
Fairies Punch Too
Aryna_Stan
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Thank you so much for your feedback, I realize to that I have to build on their world. It's a little complicating because I don't want to over concentrate on building the world and forget to build the story or the characters, we're just at the very beginning and I'd to build up the world as we go, I realize to that I've been very vague with the scenery, thank you so much for bringing this to my attention, I'll work on it.