Reviews of Divine Seal Monarch [Dropped]
Divine Seal Monarch [Dropped]
ImperialDarkFrost
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ABSOLUTELY AMAZING THIS THE MC GROWTH FEELS BIG YET RIGHT AT ALL TURNS EVERY PAGE IS A HEAVENLY TREAT FOR AN IMMORTAL THAT HAS LOST HIS TAST BUDS.. FOOLISH IMMORTALS, MORTAL, DEMONS, AND BEAST IF YOU DONT READ THIS NOVEL YOU WILL NEVER STEP ON THE TRUE PATH OF IMMORTALITY THE DAO IS THICK IN THIS ONE! READ AND BE ENLIGHTENED on what is a -NOVEL-! No but seriously please consider reading this if you don’t ure really missing out....
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Honestly this is pretty good. [So far] I think it’s better then ‘Consuming Earth,Devouring Skies’ in terms of plot since it’s more organized. It’s obvious the one who gave the MC the cruelest curse is Fey whose the most suspicious. I really hope whoever it is and when MC learns about this curse, he will handle it in a calm matter. If not I’d be disappointed. He’s had many years of tempering and no longer a child after all. Though I love how he gets emberassed and carefree and stuff. Shows he’s human. I think what kinda ruin this story is Author adding the RPG elements. Guilds,Elves,Mages,Ect. You’ll eventually find yourself in a spiderweb. It was already a outstanding Xianxia by itself. I’ve enjoyed every minute of reading this. If you’ve changed the names to more Xianxia like, it’d probably be even a more believable Xianxia. Speaking of which. I really love Xu Qing. She made the best impression out of all the newly introduced characters. She may look cold as ice but is a unique character. You really rushed it in her arc, there. I was expecting her to fight MC in tournament but then was quickly erased. Then suddenly a lot of time has passed and Mc already nearly completed with his mission. I was hoping for these newly inner disciples to face some hardship together but already near the end of this mission. Anyways, I have high expectations for this for now. Maybe it’s not to late to fix some mistakes. At first I was doubtful due to the Cover but now I realize how fitting it is because that’s how I imagined the Mc
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So far it seems that this story is decent. The characters are believable, the world is interesting, it’s even frequently updating. Even with all that though this novel is nearly illegible, lacking proper grammar or spelling. Sometimes sentences are just left half completed or all the words are garbled and in the wrong places. I can’t get absorbed in the novel because to even understand what the author is trying to say I have to translate it into something that makes sense. It’s a shame really, this book seems to have promise.
You need to watch your tenses or get an editor. Ps their not thier. Other than that pretty good work as of chap 34. Is much more easier a homage to past translations? Much easier would be correct and just sounds more natural, unless it is homage then feel free to ignore this. I am only writing more to meet the minimum characters.
I gave a solid 3 across the board through really I’m only interested in the fact that there a writing errors which lead to a loss of rhythm for me, and lack of interest. I have no clue about the rest of the story. Sounds interesting so far, but couldn’t make it past maybe the halfway point of the first chapter. However what I read was enough to make me check back periodically for updated chapters and an editor or for the author to go back.
