Review Detail of Ehbon in Divine Seal Monarch [Dropped]

So far it seems that this story is decent. The characters are believable, the world is interesting, it’s even frequently updating. Even with all that though this novel is nearly illegible, lacking proper grammar or spelling. Sometimes sentences are just left half completed or all the words are garbled and in the wrong places. I can’t get absorbed in the novel because to even understand what the author is trying to say I have to translate it into something that makes sense. It’s a shame really, this book seems to have promise.