Honestly this is pretty good. [So far] I think it’s better then ‘Consuming Earth,Devouring Skies’ in terms of plot since it’s more organized. It’s obvious the one who gave the MC the cruelest curse is Fey whose the most suspicious. I really hope whoever it is and when MC learns about this curse, he will handle it in a calm matter. If not I’d be disappointed. He’s had many years of tempering and no longer a child after all. Though I love how he gets emberassed and carefree and stuff. Shows he’s human. I think what kinda ruin this story is Author adding the RPG elements. Guilds,Elves,Mages,Ect. You’ll eventually find yourself in a spiderweb. It was already a outstanding Xianxia by itself. I’ve enjoyed every minute of reading this. If you’ve changed the names to more Xianxia like, it’d probably be even a more believable Xianxia. Speaking of which. I really love Xu Qing. She made the best impression out of all the newly introduced characters. She may look cold as ice but is a unique character. You really rushed it in her arc, there. I was expecting her to fight MC in tournament but then was quickly erased. Then suddenly a lot of time has passed and Mc already nearly completed with his mission. I was hoping for these newly inner disciples to face some hardship together but already near the end of this mission. Anyways, I have high expectations for this for now. Maybe it’s not to late to fix some mistakes. At first I was doubtful due to the Cover but now I realize how fitting it is because that’s how I imagined the Mc
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