Review Detail of Tiamat_The_Goddess in Divine Seal Monarch [Dropped]

I gave a solid 3 across the board through really I’m only interested in the fact that there a writing errors which lead to a loss of rhythm for me, and lack of interest. I have no clue about the rest of the story. Sounds interesting so far, but couldn’t make it past maybe the halfway point of the first chapter. However what I read was enough to make me check back periodically for updated chapters and an editor or for the author to go back.