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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM6mth
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    Dishonorable she sold herself and now is looking to renege.

    Ch 4 4. Tiptoeing to the last room
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    Forced To Marry The Devil : A Crazy Love Saga
    Urban · go_kizy
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM6mth
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    Is this suppose to be a western fantasy? Because, killing a whole noble family for a daughter's murder, would be inviting rebellion, collective responsibility... Even killing a noble daughter without a trial, would be courting rebellion. I know in the east it was somewhat different, but the western names.. Even taking away the families nobility for her crime would court rebellion.

    Ch 1 The Start Of My End
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    I Only Care For Evil Duke's Child
    Fantasy · I_am_Creator
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM6mth
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    The story king is dead, long live the king. He would not be a prince, in most hereditary monarchies accession is automatic upon death of the monarch. Unless there is some form of electoral process your MC woke up as the emperor not a prince. but then again it is your fantasy novel, but you should come up with some backstory to explain this anomaly..

    Now that the Emperor is dead, the next in line for the throne would be Alexander Romanoff, i.e. him.
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    Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince
    History · SorryImJustDiamond
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM6mth
    Commented

    The wife of an emperor is an empress...

    Alexander Romanoff was the only son of Emperor Nicholas III and Queen Alexandra. The only boy in the royal family and has four sisters.
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    Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince
    History · SorryImJustDiamond
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM6mth
    Posted

    The story seems nice and it is perfectly readable, but the writing is just so awkward. like, instead of using debit card, the author says gives the definition instead. I'm trying to get used to the awkwardness, but to me it just might not be worth it. I will give it a few more chapters...

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    Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise
    Urban · Llaellen
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM7mth
    Commented

    Is Morgan a girl or a boy?

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: Concealment
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    Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!
    General · Like Dawn
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM7mth
    Commented

    Maybe her grandfather realized she was most likely raped, therefore not to be blamed... like any decent person.

    Ch 7 IT'S OKAY TO PLAY AROUND
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    Chasing My CEO Husband
    Urban · Sal_World
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM7mth
    Commented

    The story seems nice, but the incoherence gives me a headache. I would definitely be willing to give this author another try if their English improves or they get a good editor.

    Ch 2 Chapter (2): The CEO of River group
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    Her Hidden Marriage With Mr. Possessive CEO
    Urban · Nazninimei
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM7mth
    Commented

    Does China, really allow employers to punish employees for not allowing themselves to be sexually assaulted?

    Ch 10 100% Luck
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    I Have Awesome Luck
    Urban · Wu Xin 1008
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM7mth
    Commented

    Her brother is a mega simp.

    Ch 5 50% Luck
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    I Have Awesome Luck
    Urban · Wu Xin 1008
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM7mth
    Commented

    It sounds like they only called him henpecked because he is henpecked.

    Ch 28 Chapter 28 Huo Yan's Grandparents
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    Rebirth of The Female Devil
    Fantasy · DaoistStDV7U
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM7mth
    Posted

    Good story. The downside is the translation quality drops dramatically around chapter 64, so much so I had to drop. But, your threshold for headache inducing bad translation might be different then mine.

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    Thank you for Waiting, Mister Tang!
    Urban · Yao Yao Xian Er
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM8mth
    Commented

    Don't you have to have matching blood types for a bone marrow transpant? And if so, then wouldn't it be impossible for the "real" daughter to be the real daughter?

    Ch 1 Rebirth and Return
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    Full-Level Rich Daughter Makes a Strong Comeback
    Urban · Summer Powder
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM8mth
    Commented

    The highest denomination in the US $100 bill. 100 bills is quite a lot to carry around, especially in Americas card based economy. You can even get $1 lottery ticket with your card now days.

    Ch 1 10,000 Dollars for a Night (E)
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    Arranged Marriage: To Hear Your Voice
    Urban · TheIllusionist
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM9mth
    Commented

    Shareholders are not responsible for corporate debt, unless the corporate veil is pierced, that is whole point in incorporation, limited liability...

    Ch 2 A Retard Getting Married
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    Mr. Ye's Wife is Sassy and Flirtatious
    Urban · Midnight
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM9mth
    Commented

    I am assuming, sense they share the same last name, that half-sister and not stepsister, right? I know it a common mistake in Asian translations.

    Ch 1 A Retard and a Cripple, a Perfect Match!
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    Mr. Ye's Wife is Sassy and Flirtatious
    Urban · Midnight
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM11mth
    Commented

    Maybe a grand niece?

    Shen Yan saw Shen Xue's upset look. Although Shen Xue wasn't directly related to Shen Yu, she was still his granddaughter.
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    My Genius Sister is Only Seven!?
    Urban · Tong Tong
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM11mth
    Commented

    Badly needs an editor, not unreadable, but about two notches from it.

    Ch 1 Pitiful Death..(Edited)
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    ETERNAL LOVE : A LOVE STORY
    Fantasy · Kamlyn
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM11mth
    Commented

    What is wrong with this girl? no round trip ticket or explanation? showing any trust for someone she knows is a scam bag scammer? Stupid ditz would be my generous evaluation.

    Ch 8 HIS RETURN 1
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    I MARRIED A HEARTLESS BILLIONAIRE
    Urban · Kourtney_Sspears
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  • JefferyM
    JefferyM1yr
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    Can he opt out of the test by resigning ? If not a 90% causality rate for mages seems stupidly high. It would make recruitment hard, and is really bad if magical ability is hereditary.

    Ch 4 Death all around
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    Reborn as God: The strongest system
    Fantasy · PillGrandCreator
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