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Reviews of Dainsleif: Grand order

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Dainsleif: Grand order

Yonko_master

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The_Supreme_White
The_Supreme_WhiteLv4The_Supreme_White

Great job author you have a great story going. keep this up and you might be what reader who are tried of the classic chinese racist cliche are looking for. My advice would be to make the characters more realistic with their personality and ideology not like the cheap stuff everywhere on this app.

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Yonko_master
Yonko_masterAuthorYonko_master

shameless review. Be sure to leave a comment and wear a mask when you are going to do anything which is relate to outside world because I don't want to die

MA_Writecrft
MA_WritecrftLv4MA_Writecrft

that cover... you must be a fan of him... Arcadum the master of dungeons on YouTube. I'm looking forward in reading your story. may everyone know that art is something that only be refined, and not made in a single night.

Thatguyray
ThatguyrayLv1Thatguyray

Sap Yonko. Am really enjoying your novel. Wish you the best of luck with the contest. Am also participating in it but gotta hand it to you I love this and am looking forward to more chapters. 😊

Illona_sama_5462
Illona_sama_5462Lv3Illona_sama_5462

Jesus Christ! Wow, Yonko, I never believe you will want to make it to the competition. I sure wish you the best and hope you will do great. Continue with the job. The book's cover is so good as far as the name. For the content, I'm reading it just now. You know determination is magic! Like Asta Black Clover says...

Williane_M_P
Williane_M_PLv3Williane_M_P

The story is very engaging and hooked me a lot, its writing quality great. The world background reminds me a lot of Solo leveling which I love. Its story is of great power.

JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv1JJ_Prakoso

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Book_Pen
Book_PenLv3Book_Pen

It is a good and interesting plot with vivid description of the surroundings and even the emotions of the characters are well explained. Well Written!!!!😊 Keep going!!!

Kandpalbhaskar010
Kandpalbhaskar010Lv4Kandpalbhaskar010

The story is well-written and the plot is interesting Although there are grammatical mistakes, they can be improved with the time. As they say 'Practice makes the man perfect'. But no doubt, this story has great potential. Not to say, author updates the novel daily. 2 chapters a day which is really great.

JjangNoonim
JjangNoonimLv12JjangNoonim

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Levi_owo
Levi_owoLv2Levi_owo

Loved the story and characters. I got hooked into the story from the very first chapter and as I continued reading, it got better and better. The writing style felt a little dull but it something which can be improved.

Soun_Phavin
Soun_PhavinLv10Soun_Phavin

The cover and the synopsis are attractive and hook the readers. Jason is a well built character. The unique world written by the author is also good. I think adding the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter might be nice. Anyway, good job author. Take care and stay safe.❤️☘️

DAIOSITS
DAIOSITSLv2DAIOSITS

Great story so far, good development, but your sypnosis could be better however. You give a real personality to your characters and that is my favourite aspect