Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in Dainsleif: Grand order

Here are my thoughts about this novel, Worldbuilding: So far I do really enjoy the lore and the world the author presented here. Yes, the author gives information about the mage and the story of the demons. But, I suggest the author give a more detailed description of the world to make it much more interesting and fascinating to explore. Character: As for Jason, he is actually one of the few Webnovel Protagonist that actually have a clear motivation which one of them is finding his death and it's quite exciting to see it happen. His dad also added some mysteries that the main character of course want to find it. He is also a very chilled personality and I do can't wait for future development he will have in the laters chapter. As for the side character they are all fine I guess and have a distinct appearances, but I do believe the author can give more detail about to make each of the character more distinct with one another. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!