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Kandpalbhaskar010
Kandpalbhaskar010Lv42yrKandpalbhaskar010

The story is well-written and the plot is interesting Although there are grammatical mistakes, they can be improved with the time. As they say 'Practice makes the man perfect'. But no doubt, this story has great potential. Not to say, author updates the novel daily. 2 chapters a day which is really great.

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Dainsleif: Grand order

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Kandpalbhaskar010
Kandpalbhaskar010Lv4Kandpalbhaskar010

I wanted to give 5 stars. But there are many mistakes. I strongly recommend Grammarly. It will truly help you a lot. As it helped me a lot.

Yonko_master
Yonko_masterAuthorYonko_master

Can we download it on mobile? Because I'm on vacation, so I make alot of mistakes cuz I write my book on mobile

Kandpalbhaskar010
Kandpalbhaskar010Lv4Kandpalbhaskar010

Yeah sure. You can download it on android.

Yonko_master:Can we download it on mobile? Because I'm on vacation, so I make alot of mistakes cuz I write my book on mobile