Book_Pen
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Book_Pen1yrPostedLove the plot and the way the author made it intriguing. The writing style protrays how author wants to add every emotion to make it fun, sad and excited at the same time. Good work!! However, they are a few points that I kind of didn't like(purely personnel opinion). The length of the chapters, the sudden and at once throw of character info, the way the author differentiated two places or scenarios. I feel such a good plot and a fantastic writing skill shouldn't be hindered by some minute details. But frankly, love the plot and execution!
- Book_Pen1yrReplied to MayDreamer
sure🥰
Both of them are the polar opposite of each other, but what will happen when their path come across each other, - Book_Pen1yrCommented
😂
" Oh sorry, I thought you are our school bell so I thought of hitting it." - Book_Pen1yrCommented
time travelled
Yang Feng knows this boy very well as he is no other than his long term best friend, Zhang Yuan. - Book_Pen1yrCommented
indications of magic to happen
"Young Man forgiveness isn't so easy to give and also tough to get...but today is a special day and I can see it in your eyes...the time is about to change." The old lady said as she smiled and turns around giving goosebumps to Ming. - Book_Pen1yrCommented
magic is gonna happen👏👏👏
' According to the information we have got today! Two stars in the sky are about to collide for the first time in history and this colliding may lead to the formation of a Colourful Nova which was never been seen before!! And if things well today we all will be able to see the magic of the universe.' The news reporter on the TV screen said as Feng ate his breakfast peacefully not paying attention to the TV. - Book_Pen1yrCommented
brother...that's a good reveal!
He is the ex-husband of Ling as well as Kai's father. He is the cousin brother of Ning. - Book_Pen1yrCommented
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"Huh? Didn't I give this to Yang Feng?" She talked to herself, confused until it hit her brain. "Holy!! Wait, I gave him her diary instead of the notebook!!" - Book_Pen1yrCommented
Ah!! someone say the reason!!
"Well it's not late yet, you can jump if you want to, though I know you can't since you are a coward." Saying that Ling left him alone there and went back to Kai who was sitting there like the good boy he was. - Book_Pen1yrCommented
A common thing for handsome lads
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will she take the happiness or will he be dripped in her sadness and lifelessness?
Both of them are the polar opposite of each other, but what will happen when their path come across each other, - Book_Pen1yrCommented
This is me!
Feng: "Happiness is a choice." - Book_Pen1yrCommentedCh 1 Drunken Mistake
- Book_Pen1yrCommentedCh 1 One way to be welcomed: Punishment
- Book_Pen1yrCommentedCh 1 To Stand Out
- Book_Pen1yrReplied to Kailykilimo
wow!! Thanks, hope you continue reading!!
His eyes delved into her light blue eyes, which reminded him of cool ocean water. His heart pounded wildly while his stomach swirled. - Book_Pen1yrReplied to KailykilimoCh 4 Fever
- Book_Pen1yrReplied to Kailykilimo
Yeah!! Ocean Eyes song is also my favourite. But I rarely see blue and hazel eyes in our country. So, I tend to make my character's eyes colourful!!
His eyes delved into her light blue eyes, which reminded him of cool ocean water. His heart pounded wildly while his stomach swirled. - Book_Pen1yrReplied to Kailykilimo
Thanks🙂
Pursuing her lips, she stamped on the ground, took a deep breath, and put the phone back over her ear. "Sure! When… when do you want to meet?" she fumbled. - Book_Pen1yrReplied to Kailykilimo
I don't want to marry you.
Sophie loudly sobbed while his father stood in a corner with a dropped shoulder and head. Lili's heart sank to her stomach to see her parents in the situation. 'Am I being selfish?' she asked herself and 'YES' was the reply her heart gave. "Dad, give me his number. I need to speak to him."