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I like stories with the family genre in it and this is one of them. It has a nice background of the Hei family, a good relationship between the two sisters, Hei Lin and Hei Qing. The storyline is good. But just a little bit of grammatical errors in it. Overall, it's all good. Keep up the good work author!
This is a very cute story about two sisters. I really like the laid back vibe I'm getting from reading these chapters. My only gripe is the writing quality. Author you need to capitalise the start of your sentences. It really helps to differentiate one from another so it doesn't look jumbled together. Also the misuse of periods and commas could be looked into further. Overall its pretty good, well done author