Review Detail of EternalNightLotus in Bring a Boyfriend home : Gift a husband to Sister

This is a very cute story about two sisters. I really like the laid back vibe I'm getting from reading these chapters. My only gripe is the writing quality. Author you need to capitalise the start of your sentences. It really helps to differentiate one from another so it doesn't look jumbled together. Also the misuse of periods and commas could be looked into further. Overall its pretty good, well done author