Commoner_Prince
I didn’t like this story. It’s not bad but I didn’t like it. Outside of the plot the story is filled with grammar and spelling issues which slows down the reader by forcing them to puzzle out the meaning of the sentences and paragraphs. Another thing that lowers the quality of the fanfic in my mind is that it makes a lot of mistakes with how chakra works and starts including cultivation novel crap and really it’s a whole lot of nonsense which I’m not into. If you don’t care about cultivation stuff in a Naruto fanfiction and grammar issues don’t cause you problems then read this to see if you like the plot. I did not like this and as is my prerogative as a reviewer my score of this novel shall reflect my dislike.
I don't know why this was overrated, but it definitely doesn't deserves a 5 star, heck it's even below average. The base idea for the stuff was excellent but the author ruined it, he used too much wuxia stuff in this novel, almost every para has some kind of grammatical mistake, characters are introduced from nowhere, author didn't do any research about the timeline and age of characters before writing, the writing style is barely passable and the the chaps are just too small ( appx 500 words)
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It is more of a crossover between naruto and a cheap cultivation novel. Totally wrong chakra theory is mixed chapter long explanations of him cultivating "chakra in his meridians" ? Higlight was MC using yin/yang chakra release to cultivate his body before he even mastered tree climbing. I mean seriously? yin/yang chakra? The six paths stuff of creation soul reading and reviving? Ima out