yea it is stolen. The original is "meddling giant" form cloud9storys over on Fanfiction.net

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i love this Story. But i am pretty sure i already read this somewhere. now my question is: are you the original author reposting it or have you adopted the Story. As far as i remember it he should sacrifice his father for a protection ward around his Home, has a run in with a Werewolf and afterwards the Story was discontinued after around the middle of his next school year.

It really depends on how you want to do the mixed worlds part. If you just want to take the FL over to HP world in some kind of magical accident then i am all for it. Completely mixing two worlds is always kind of tricky in my oppinion because none of the originaly canon parts would make sense with many new characters with their own ideals and interests on the playing field. In most cases you would have to write a completely new story with all characters intrests in mind or you need a good reason why they dont interact.

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Have you heard of the tale of Bob Uchiha ?

Thank you. Your story always makes my day a little bit better.

I love your book. Don't let the negative comments affect you. Your book is wonderfull so far, in fact it is more of a book then the fast paced little storys fanfic's normaly are, and that is probably the point some of us readers complain in the first place. Stay yourself and do what you like with your story. It is your fantasy and imagination we are all enjoing here, not the other way around.

No pls Not..

i love your Story. especially the fluff part. please continue writing, you are great.

just add the Harem Tag, so people like me who don't like it don't need to read a bunch of chapters just to be dissapointed with the way you do things. I have the impression that it is just bait at this point. especially consdering that webnovel doesn't have a no Harem Tag

I am currently reading chapter 35 and i felt the urge to write a revew, so here i am. I love the way you merged snapes and anikins personality. one can clearly perceive both of their traits in the mc. Your grammar is, as far as I as a non native speaker can judge, flawless. A typo every few chapters, but who cares. The Idea in it self is realy interresting and I cant whait to see how he integrates jedi techniques into modern magic. The only things that annoy me are his, in my oppinion, way to fast change in the looks department (Snape in the books was ugly, and after a few weeks of training he is described as some sort of prince?) and him growing a buisness empire in a few weeks. For everyone who understands even a little bit about buisness stuff that is just cringe. Even if you have a prototype, binging new produkts on the market can take jears. A portable computer in the 70s ? Way to unrealistic, considering most of the hardware making something like that possible wasn't even invented jet. A simple cRT screen without any computing power could weight 30 kg and more back then, and that is without batterys.

thank you ;)

1000 c would mean it isn't even molten

yea. Coudn't read past " i got died after..." and that is literary the first sentence.

Ah ok makes sense. I still think that your picture is more of a look he could have after he got an ultimate racial class like " god of the cursed sand " . sure, you need a somewhat sexy mc for future fluff but a normal mummy is a rotting corpse in my mind

The writing quality is ok. I mean better than normal translation fanfic's and readable without hedaches. I like the charakter desing, definitely something new and unique and the powers the mc recives fit well in the concept. A few of the skills are a little bit too op for my taste and make it seem a bit forced. I mean, there is nothing wrong with op skills, but a *100 multiplicator for a level 2 character without doing anithing special is a bit much. Make him op when he reaches lvl 100 and has accumulated a few achievements. dont give him skills equivalent to or even better than momongas " the goal of all live is death " from the beginning. At least that is my opinion.

that's not a mummy. it's a normal human with a few bandages around his torso

i just remembered why i stopped reading this after the first chapter the last time around. Instead of someone with a Hard past she sounds like an annoying spoiled brat who got everything handed to them on a silver plate but procedes to destroy her new xbox because their parents refused to also by the new playstation. Fu*k, i hate her already.

i personally love your writing. hard to compare it to something because you deffinitely have a unique style and i haven't read a ff with so much really great humor without it feeling like some sort of comedy show up till now. the only thing i could possibly think of to improve is a bit of character development or struggle for bakugo, but dont take this too seriously. this is already a masterpeace . ( ship the invisible ship )