I didn’t like this story. It’s not bad but I didn’t like it. Outside of the plot the story is filled with grammar and spelling issues which slows down the reader by forcing them to puzzle out the meaning of the sentences and paragraphs. Another thing that lowers the quality of the fanfic in my mind is that it makes a lot of mistakes with how chakra works and starts including cultivation novel crap and really it’s a whole lot of nonsense which I’m not into. If you don’t care about cultivation stuff in a Naruto fanfiction and grammar issues don’t cause you problems then read this to see if you like the plot. I did not like this and as is my prerogative as a reviewer my score of this novel shall reflect my dislike.
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