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Takeya_Harumi

Takeya_Harumi

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Current Head of the World End Garden Clan

2018-04-30 JoinedCanada
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    TBH, I’m pretty sure people here care more whether Bibi Dong is...you know, with the MC.... Poll below 1) yes 2) no 3) yes Yes YESSSSSSSS!

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    Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    HahhAhahah!

    "ouch..."
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    Walk around Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    How in the world, is a vegetable dish greasy? and delicious?

    What awaits him is a meal of greasy green vegetables with bamboo shoots, He had the honor to taste it once before, and it was really Delicious.
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    Walk around Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    This is not what I had in mind when I saw elementalist in the title. Are you sure he’s an elementalist, not a magic warrior instead?

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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    Just a suggestion. In a desperate situation like this most people if not all, don’t have the capability to think that much. So I suggest you limit describing what the MC is thinking during fights. Specially one that is that sudden and unexpected. Put it this way: How many things can you think of just before you get into a car accident?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4(Floor 1)
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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    Yank? Dude you need a proof reader or something.

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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    You mean Tsubaki right?

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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    Not gonna lie. It feels kinda force how he joined. But whatever...

    Ch 2 Chapter 2(My goddess?)
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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    Hahaha if only he could barbecue it.

    He asked the antelope, but it kept looking at him with a strange expression. He couldn't tell what it meant. It looked a little like pity, regret, contempt, and a hint of gloating. In short, Zhou Wen's hair stood on end every time he looked at it, but the antelope didn't give him an answer.
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    Let Me Game in Peace
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Posted

    Pretty good start but the author started slipping off. Too many plot holes and MC geting dumber by the chapter. Maybe the author is getting pressured. I don’t know. Judge for yourself. FYI, I stop at ch 78

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    The System: Civilian Shinobi
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    I’m almost sure that’s not how healing jutsu work but whatever ^_^

    I let that statement hang as everyone stared at my leg in wonder, I took out a bandage and swiftly close the hole in my trousers with it before turning back, "... As long as I have chakra, if someone doesn't take my head off or my heart out, I can continue fighting… the Fifth Hokage, Tsunade-sama wanted me to inform you guys that medical Ninjutsu will be included in the curriculum soon and it will be an optional subject, Medical Ninjutsu is just another tool in your arsenal, just like your kunai's… but far more effective at saving your and your loved one's lives..."
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    Correct me id I’m wrong but doesn’t Gamer’s mind protect against this kind of thing? e.g. psychological trauma, etc.

    'Guess I will have to suffer at least this much...there was so much blood though...I don't wanna freeze the next time this happens...'
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    The System: Civilian Shinobi
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    *Hayate coughing* 2019 mentality: Poor guy, I hope MC saves him somehow ( ・᷄ὢ・᷅ ) 2020 mentality: KiLLL HimMm! KILL HIM NOW!!! ◡ ヽ(`Д´)ノ ┻━┻

    "Morning Tobi-chan!" I puff my cheeks at his familiar greeting before saying, "Wanna spar!" His eyes dimmed a little and he coughed a little... I quickly went through the seals for mystical palms and placed my hands on his chest as green healing chakra increased his cell's self-healing ability. I concentrated on healing his discomfort as Hinata and Shino arrived in the clearing.
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    The System: Civilian Shinobi
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Replied to Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU

    No...

    Iruka sensei walks into the class exactly at 8 in the morning and was looking around the class. 'Huh! Is it just me or is he looking banged up a little, and where is Mizuki-sensei, isn't a teaching assistant supposed to help Iruka-sensei when he looks like that?'
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    The System: Civilian Shinobi
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    Life is not all about xp you know?!

    'Yeah, I see you System, you can try that again but you won't trigger me this time, you wanna know why, because I just leveled up 2 times today… so, Fuck you...' I screamed obscenities at the system while cleaning the dishes and ignoring the sound of a successfully completed quest and that measly reward, I walked up to my room after saying good night.
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    The System: Civilian Shinobi
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    ...on the next episode of dragon ba...oops I mean...

    Ch 66 Chapter 33 Disorder Wind Splitting Staff, Martial Spirit Real Guard 1/2
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    Unnecessarily showing off at this point -_-

    Ch 65 Chapter 32 Fighting The Motionless Bright King Zhao Wuji 2/2
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Commented

    First of all, Author, you are a machine. Pumping out so many chapters :) Second, I question the MC’s decision making. Which always seems to court death.

    Ch 40 40
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    Worst Soul Reaper
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Replied to Choco_Monster

    He literally said, “you are a trash spirit master”! You’re saying that’s not an insult?

    ''I...'' Tang San muttered with a wry smile as he can't let someone insulting his teacher.
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    I AM A SUMMONER IN ANOTHER WORLD
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  • Takeya_Harumi
    Takeya_Harumi3yr
    Replied to john764

    Ur logic doesn’t apply to a fictional story ( ^ω^ )

    ''I don't know if this bad or not...'' Lin Feng muttered.
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    I AM A SUMMONER IN ANOTHER WORLD
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