Reviews of Be Supreme!

My first fantasy story! I wanted to post this for quite a while and since I'm having difficulties with insect king I decided to write this one since it would be better than doing nothing in my free time. Expect a mature & cautious MC, he won't be a good guy hero neither some edge lord villain. Just some guy who wants to enjoy his new life. He won't have a cheat and will be extremely weak at the beginning so I just ask you guys to be patient with him. Also, for my readers from other works... I'm deeply sorry!

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The authors way with his words is good enough to make a reader immersed into reading! EXCELLENT grammar, at least I didn't find any mistake in the first 4 chapter)include prolouge/) Good luck!

I love the plot! Also the character is very well designed. So far I have not noticed any spelling or grammar mistakes, I can tell that the author had taken in time to check her work. I am looking forward to future chapters!😊

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Well The Starting is quite Explosive which I like beacuse of that I was attracted towards it in the start only. The Follow up of the novel is Going good. The Character and World Background can be Improved but still I do recommend this novel. I hope you won't give up writing and update More and More Chapters

I must say that this turned out to be better than expected, I really loved it. You have an amazing writing style, you write perfect descriptions, and you play with words so smoothly that it makes the story enjoyable and easy to read. I absolutely want to see where this is going, and I bet everyone is eager to know about "The favor" and Leon's past life and also see what the future holds for him. Thank you for this amazing work!

Everything seems to nice. The plot is interesting, especially the last chapter, the characters are described in a profound and astounding way, and I have no complaints when it comes to world background. When it comes to writing quality however, I've noticed that some words are capitalized such as "it" in the very first paragraph. However, for me, capitalization errors don't impact the story that much. Although, when it comes to the grammar police, they'll surely complain about this. When it comes to spelling and vocabulary, there are little to no errors at all which is another unique feature of this novel. Since there are four chapters, it will still be hard to determine the pace of the story development. Maybe proofreading could avoid you from grammar police, further complaining about the capitalization. Capitalization is the only error I've noticed. I am not good when it comes to grammar, therefore, I have no right to judge the grammar of your book. Keep up the good work!

This is actually one of the better-written stories I've reviewed on WN. It's Isekai, which also doesn't hurt as I'm a big fan of that genre. In line with most Isekai MC's die, go to the afterlife, are reborn, it doesn't vary much. Though the "god" in the afterlife seems less than trustworthy. The only major improvement was odd capitalization throughout. That and a couple of run-on sentences but they weren't really enough to stop me from reading. The pace was good, only chapter 3 felt a tad slow, and chapter 4 definitely hooked me again at the end. Very curious to see what the rules of this world are and what/if Leon will get his cheat/powers.

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