Review Detail of NotUse in Be Supreme!

Everything seems to nice. The plot is interesting, especially the last chapter, the characters are described in a profound and astounding way, and I have no complaints when it comes to world background. When it comes to writing quality however, I've noticed that some words are capitalized such as "it" in the very first paragraph. However, for me, capitalization errors don't impact the story that much. Although, when it comes to the grammar police, they'll surely complain about this. When it comes to spelling and vocabulary, there are little to no errors at all which is another unique feature of this novel. Since there are four chapters, it will still be hard to determine the pace of the story development. Maybe proofreading could avoid you from grammar police, further complaining about the capitalization. Capitalization is the only error I've noticed. I am not good when it comes to grammar, therefore, I have no right to judge the grammar of your book. Keep up the good work!