The title page is beautiful. The idea of the novel looks fascinating. A text block, similar to mine, has a lot of expression and few dialogs. But you have a stronger side that the text is easier to read. The chapters are not so big. If you will dilute the text more dialogs, reading will be more interesting IMHO. It would be nice if the author wrote how often he would update his novel in a week. I liked your romance. I liked and your determination to complete, all your novels, that you did not leave them ... that you will continue to write them! I had many ideas, I implemented them as novels. But ratio was not in my favor, so I quickly completed these novels, but did not quit. Abandoned novels, there are so many of them, and I, as a reader, are sorry that they were left without an ending. Thank you, it was interesting to read you! Success in creative work!
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