This is actually one of the better-written stories I've reviewed on WN. It's Isekai, which also doesn't hurt as I'm a big fan of that genre. In line with most Isekai MC's die, go to the afterlife, are reborn, it doesn't vary much. Though the "god" in the afterlife seems less than trustworthy. The only major improvement was odd capitalization throughout. That and a couple of run-on sentences but they weren't really enough to stop me from reading. The pace was good, only chapter 3 felt a tad slow, and chapter 4 definitely hooked me again at the end. Very curious to see what the rules of this world are and what/if Leon will get his cheat/powers.
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