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Review Detail of LTLLucas in Be Supreme!

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So far, it seems like the start of your average isekai fantasy. No cheats aside, I really don't see what will separate your character from the rest of the bunch. Then again, the story's in it's very early stages so I can only assume more development will come. For what it's initially worth however, it shows a lot of promise and I'm definitely eager to see more. We haven't been introduced to many characters besides Leon and "ManGod", so I can't really credit much in terms of character design. However, the writing's amazing, I'm sure the updates will be fast and despite being generic, it's an engaging kind of generic that definitely keeps the readers engaged. As for the world background, that was probably the story's weakest point. A fantasy story's main point of attraction should be it's fantasy element, yet when the character was transported to the new world, he spends an entire chapter messing around in a forest with nothing going for it wondering what the world has. I understand that you want to slowly introduce the world building, but you need a hook to catch people's interests right away so that they would be invested in the world. It isn't until chapter 4 until we get something fantasy like with the reptilian creatures by the town gates. Overall, it's a solid story, and I'm glad we finally have a transmigration story where the MC isn't an overpowered harem lord.

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Great review! This surely helps a lot!