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Why did he come home ?? He's still a weakling! He has not learned the art of qi! He has not perfected his martial arts! Batman at his age had already studied more than 90 types of martial arts, became a master of weapons, ninjutsu, stealth, many types of meditation, became a master of yoga, acrobatics, gymnastics, acting, learned tricks from Giovanni Zatara, became a professor in many scientific disciplines, dance, tempered the body, soul, mind and heart, to fight his own fears, the moments when Batman was in a state of shock can be counted on one hand, he reached the body of the Olympic level! He's a Sherlock-level detective, he's traveled half the world !! He calculated his travel plan in just a few minutes! He adopted the experience of many people in different fields of study around the world! Translated by Google translate !!
trash very trash the author killed the MC parent just to make him have a sad background to let him become batman of the MCU very trash don't read the author keeps blabing about learning from his previous fan fic yet he seems not don't trust the other reviews the author obviously deleted the bad ones while the rest has come from his alt accounts
Stupid Plot no slight logic at all. How can a kid survived from Winter Soldier? Even if he did training he's still a kid so how can he compared to WS. Never did like Batman(Bruce Wayne), because he is arrogant, naive, and has mental problem. He also force his own beliefs which is "No Killing Rule" to everyone. The only reason Bruce Wayne survived in Batman comics and etc because he is The Batman = Absolute Plot Armor.True fact Flash and Superman can kill Batman if they want to, Bruce doesn't know how he died and there are many ways to kill Batman.
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you got a frame work for story but not refined. the fact a 10 year old kid can survive winter Soldier is weird for me. it would have been fine if u have explained how that's possible.i mean we all only know that the kid trained from age of 4 to 10.but thats it we don't know what he achieved through that 6 years and I don't even know how mc looks like. the next problem is he is a smartass too.but I don't know how he become smart.after 10 years of world travel he come back and become batman and build an arsenal of bat man like all batman eqipment like batmobile etc.but I don't know where he got the knowledge.he told us that he make a AI comparable or better than Jarvis but how? a lack of information of how he achieved what he did is the only problem I have. for eg: kid started training (there is not much information of what he trained and specialised in story) then one day kid got traped with monster and somehow killed it.(no idea how he did that.no idea about his mental state in there and no idea how strong he is to take care of that monster, it's just monster died ,end of the arc because mc is mc and mc won't die)
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Although you made great work of introducing batman in the MCU , you later went ahead of turning all this into a lame joke . I mean seriously ? he was working as an assassin for what , 8-9 years , and then he doesnt kill anybody ? This is the reason why batman is the stupidest hero of all . Literally , he keeps capturing the his enemies who brutally kill innocents just so that they later escape arcaham and continuing their work. Dont make this the same pathetic version of DC batman . This is a big letdown . Every villain in the MCU died in the end , so you aint changing anything by killing them off , This is not DC where you see Batman fighting Joker every week. Kraven abducted a school bus full of children and then what did he do ? knocked him out . Yeah , great , bet he will never do anything bad for the rst kf his life now . Anyway , I just dont feel the stroy as it continues . Batman in MCU seems good as captain america doesnt have any power except a stronger physicue , but the idiot DC Batman in MCU is pathetic . You even made him kill the Hudra base leader and exploded the base when he was fking 10 years old and niw he is turning into a hypocrite . This story is a joke .
The first part of the story was originale he leaves But he keeps doing stupid things, looking for the hand for maybe 5-6 years but when he gets There he sudenly remeber that they brainwash people (dude come on not thinking about things a single time for 5 years. Moving forward to when he is back in new York he does What Batman does execpt that he does not prepare for the future. So when marvel starts he is just standing by and the plot is just following the movies, no differents so he might as well be a bystander