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DarkNoobWriter112mthPostedThis story has potential but the writing quality is bad, camon house elves are house boys? The names are all wrong and some sentences are very confusing to understand.
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Btw its "characters" - not charater
And to the last part, I asked like which one charater should join the harem. Because two are already fixed. But then some people were like remove Victoria. I don't think I can remove her. So this question is mostly for the old readers. Do you think I should remove Victoria? - DarkNoobWriter111yrCommented
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Its a good story but has a lot of drama....really a lot of drama so if you can somehow ignore that its a good read. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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but "He" was improving
King had also started to learn etiquette and he was a bit awkward at it for now but her was improving quite well. - DarkNoobWriter112yrReplied to Afonso_AaronCh 23 Chapter no. 23 The Demon world
- DarkNoobWriter112yrCommentedCh 57 Refight
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but se hey, he still has adriane até home so probably he will be scrwing her and all other girls including his sisters...so on his view maybe that wont be só hard for him?! But let bem honestly, i think of they would love só much like they said in this novel...I think this would be unnecessary...but hey who i am to judge someone when i havent been in love with someone
Ch 32 Chapter 27: Ryan - DarkNoobWriter112yrCommentedCh 31 Chapter 26: Adrienne
- DarkNoobWriter112yrCommentedCh 30 Chapter 25: Early Arrival
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you repete the same phrese over and over again
I was in the middle of the night, and I was in the middle of the night, and I was in the middle of the night, and I was in the middle of the night. I was in the middle of the night, and I was in the middle of the night, and I was in the middle of the night. I could see just as well, though, as if I had eyes. Now it's clear why my thoughts flow so smoothly and there's no need for human needs. I feel unusual, but I don't feel any discomfort.