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  • Ben_Craig
    Ben_Craig4d
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    This sounds good but not Bothered either way

    2. Helga Hufflepuff: Avatar and Daughter of Gaia. Can control the weather, and has a high probability of becoming a Goddess on her own if she'd lived enough.
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    Ben_Craig15d
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    You story seems to have promise but the structure and wording of your sentences can be confusing

    Ch 2 Learning
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    D

    Ch 11 Asgard
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    Ben_Craig19d
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    The time line

    Now, what do you think he should do next? Don't say Kamar Taj, or Chi manipulation. Infinity Stones will come after 300-400 years too, so suggestions should not contain these things.
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    He can go scout out earth to see how far into the line is or just start inventing random things and store them on earth with an enchantment similar to Thor’s hammer so that only people he considered worth could use them

    Now, what do you think he should do next? Don't say Kamar Taj, or Chi manipulation. Infinity Stones will come after 300-400 years too, so suggestions should not contain these things.
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  • Ben_Craig
    Ben_Craig20d
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    Thx for the chapter

    Ch 60 Second Year Ends.
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    A Muggleborn Serpent.
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    An

    He then looks at me with and understanding gaze. he answers, " Ah. I understand now. My looks must have suprised you. Well I am god But I can change my appearance. I mean I don't want to always look like an old man."
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    Ben_Craig20d
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    Looks at me with a

    He then looks at me with and understanding gaze. he answers, " Ah. I understand now. My looks must have suprised you. Well I am god But I can change my appearance. I mean I don't want to always look like an old man."
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  • Ben_Craig
    Ben_Craig20d
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    Why do You

    I'm not sure if I believe this, but I still ask the question, " Then why do look like Trevor Noah?"
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  • Ben_Craig
    Ben_Craig21d
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    The novel is good but there is a little plot hole. why is the justice league accepting his stories on his adventures so easily , at least batman would try to find any kind of evidence to his fights, and if he didnt find any he would get suspicious

    Ch 14 The Interview
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  • Ben_Craig
    Ben_Craig21d
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    So Kings haki

    I was not sure if Daz was aware of this but he had an air about him I had not witnessed on any other person so far. It demanded attention and drew your eyes and mind automatically towards him once he stepped into the room. But judging by the boy's act I doubted he was aware of this fact.
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    One Piece - My name is Bonez, Daz Bonez
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  • Ben_Craig
    Ben_Craig21d
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    This chapter was awkward. like when the dad was looking at the news paper and said the didnt rise to heaven. i dont believe that the average American would sound like that. in general the parents speech doesnt sound American English

    Ch 3 Rumors in the Town
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  • Ben_Craig
    Ben_Craig21d
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    I have a superpower

    'I am a superpower!' (?ω?)
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  • Ben_Craig
    Ben_Craig25d
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    Little plot hole why dies he know about digimon but not pokemon. realistically speaking pokemon is more widespread

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  • Ben_Craig
    Ben_Craig27d
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    I think shanks was listening in on the conversation

    Btw, I was just joking for whoever was taking this seriously. I still love you, idiots. <3 )
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    Ben_Craig28d
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    Isnt that a quote from friends

    "You started this, I want you to end it. Just think of me as a ketchup bottle, you have to bang the end of it just to get something to come out," said Eleanor.
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    Ben_Craig29d
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    Well he has a healing factor

    Just recently tokuma moved on to the eight trigrams declaring my gentle fist "passible", after months and months of work.
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  • Ben_Craig
    Ben_Craig1mth
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    Didnt Tony make the first atc reactor from scraps in the cave

    I've been able to make around 10 trips since I've discovered the place and it has been extremely fruitful. Car radios, better speakers, refrigerator parts, etc. Anything and everything you can think of was used. It was an amazing process when comparing it to what I had originally put together for Synergy. Every time I added a part to its hardware the screen would brighten ever so slightly as If to show the component was accepted. All in all, Synergy must've been updated with spare parts 50 times and they were all so it could be more powerful. Another amazingly fruitful device I created was an arc reactor. It's not exactly the most amazing version created, seeing as it was created from spare parts in a junkyard, but it worked and that's all I was asking for. The power production was amazing but the parts were wonky and I had to rely on other means more than a few times, but it was reliable for a big chunk of time and it seemed to help Synergy greatly.
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  • Ben_Craig
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    Over all this is one of the better Harry Potter fanfiction i have read. the only problems i have of it right now is of how the story will develop from now on. An example is, will it strictly or loosely follow canon, whats gonna happen with the ministry of magic towards Aurora because of her gridelwald inheritance. i cant wait to see how the author develops this story further

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  • Ben_Craig
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    Replied to Dao_Master211

    The elder blood witcher was kinda crap. there was only around 30 chapters in the witcher world at the beginning witch was the best part. after that was just grinding in Other worlds. the worst part was the mind Numbing 300 chapters of dark souls that led into a forced arc in Harry Potter

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